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AGE:
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LAST LOGIN: November 07
LAST LOGIN: November 07
34 years old
Been writing since I can remember.
Mostly poetry, but have editorials, articles for school papers, essays, and an unpublished novel under my belt.
husband is a visual artist and we plan to publish together someday. Children all write and create art, too.
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My day winds around you in and out weaving and twisting Binding me to you in everlasting hopelessness Awakening at your pools of eyes and Strangling around your sturdy ribs Braided tight at your hips Gathered and drooping at your feet.
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The instant rhyme at the beginning threw me off of the rhythm of the rest of the poem. I had to re-read it several times to get the flow of your language. I do like the conciseness of your words. It allows me to draw my own images inside my head.
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