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Very sexy and states correctly a power that women usually have over men...I don't know that it would have the same meaning being spoken by a man...just related to the nature of the beast and a man overwhelming desire for pleasure that generally surpassess most womens.

It leads me in two directions...one exhausion and discouragement.....uninspried and "smoothered in scrap paper" paper you're thrown away discouraged that it didn't say what you were trying to say and you had to start again. two smoothered in scrap paper like the scraps of paper I use to write on when inspiration strikes....and Ihae a ton of them so inspiration could be pleatiful but I feel get a feeling of discouragement...like all my unfinnished poems laying in wait for me to make them compl...

who has an agent....do you need one of those..lol....I understand and can feel your dissappointment and hurt. it almost seems as tho you need to be heard to be accpeted or loved rather than an obession with sucess or fame...but to make it reach more people with the universal feeling...the hurt the dissappointment I would back the microscope away from the event that is causing this feeling in you and speak of it in regards to the feelings it causes and not name specific events so you can tap i...

true generalization and hope inspiring...I like that almost too much of a truism but I like how it leads the reader on to all the possiblities but it makes me really want you to lead me a bit father into your thinking....walk with me awhile longer before you abandon me to my own thoughts.... I want to take the journey with you through your mind to see what you see....you left me too soon with this one...but I very much enjoy the direction you are heading me in :)

Lion's eye I walked into the lion's eye, and there stopped being a passerby as I faced it on the cobbled streets, he or I would soon know defeat from a heart that could not be tamed, now mind and heart we share the same. loved it very interesting and inspiring. thank you