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AGE:
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LOC: Wilmington, DE
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LAST LOGIN: July 21
LOC: Wilmington, DE
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 21
I try to live in the sunshine, so Albert Camus doesn’t consider my life a failure. I lost my faith at a young age and have yet to completely recover. I don’t write enough. My blog occasionally scrapes the surface.
http://blog.myspace.com/jamie_campbell
I run out of energy at the absolute worst times, especially when _.
I am starting to believe that the world really is full of unbought stuffed dogs.
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Wednesday, August 2, 2006 12:05am I guess that hamburger didn’t quite do the trick, because this third glass of J. Lohr is making me inordinately giddy and such. I wrote Chris Tucker a nice, loving myspace message and I’m almost out of agenda other than a blog. Anthony was asking about Elise et cetera and made me sort of want to finish where I left off. The whole problem with my source material is that is entirely nonfictional and it runs along a continuum that, to me, can be referenced, unde...
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You never intended to start from the denouement and work backwards, but there seems no other option at present and being eaten alive from the inside out by rampant fragments has become exhaustive. As always, it is a multi-faceted mind fuck and ninety percent your own fault, but you still adhere to some adolescent mindset that highlights the ideals through the haze. Your isms are predictable and nearly harmless unless coupled with new self-loathing and some penchant for destruction that seems ...
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I tried to read this the second time with imagined punctuation and it is a little more fluent. Have you ever read some of the sentences aloud to yourself? "Her parents had emotionally blackmailed her into having an arranged marriage eight years before with a bloke who from Pakistan and it had been around that time she turned to the man sitting before her and three years later she would carry his child." Even with commas or even semi-colons, that confuses the hell out of me. Are the rest of t...
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I've been reading this over and over and I like the plot, the premise, even the sentence structures. I can't get over the glaring spelling and grammar issues though, and I find it hard to believe this is your fourth revision. Maybe I'm missing something. It reads semi-smooth because of the constant action and intrigue, but it's almost as if the narrator is writing this all down for the first time in an attempt to explain seventy-two hours of insanity. I am going to read it again, much slower...
I like that you get smacked in the face from the get-go. I'll read any suicide note left my someone with the forethought and sincerity to ingest bleach. I wish this wasn't just a bit of the whole, because I'm a little confused and tremendously curious. I think its a great format for a "chapter" and I look forward to reading more. What actual prose appears at the end is detailed and well-written.
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