Hello there, hope all is well with you, Wow, after reading this I find myself drawn upon some very grave visuals, good and bad for it smells of reality, which I pray it isn't. That said, this piece is a powerful statement, jam packed with heart felt emotion, tugging at ones strings. Change or alter absolutly nothing here. Very, very well done here! me...

Hello there, hope all is well with you, especially if this is actually truth. I found it very compelling, sad and too real. Real as from a writing stand point is good. I just pray this isn't your life. I need to read the next chapters now that you have me interested. Very good, watch the past and present tenses, a common mistake when writing. I do it all the time. Nice job! me...

Hi there, hope your turkey turned out okay, Details, man, you boggle ones mind with your amazing attention to detail. Now with Russian History? Have you no limits woman. I love history so reading it is pure joy. You have done a marvelous job here. Good grief, just getting all the friggin' names right! You pull the average reader in as well because you have such a way of inserting your personal injection of the Sandi flavour. "Writer Leo Tolstoy 1828-1910 might be called the quintessential voi...

Hi there, Good gosh woman is there no end to your talents! You have this keen ability to paint each frame like holding up a roll of film and watching each detailed scene change. Details are most definitly your specialty. Sure, a bit vagie in a couple of tiny, tiny spot, too small to even bother you with. Ouch, hills full of Republicans with guns and hard-fast attitudes! Only difference in Government is that they use money instead of guns, still armed to the teeth though, just with our money. ...

Wow, after reading a story like this I felt so sucked in it was if I was a part of your family. The bloody Field's and their pissy attitudes. I loved they way you were able to tie the hornets nest from earlier in the story to being such a thing of natural, integral beauty and then have it be a natural balance of the Field's and their pissy ways, beautifully done! You have such a way of blending in emotion and details it's uncanny. Why you don't get published is beyond me. One doesn't merely r...

Hi there, Yes, a very sad piece but a great job conveying dispair and loss of hope. This emotional piece was short but very well done. me...

Hi there, Once I began reading this piece I found myself sucked it. So original, like a bittersweet piece of art, profound and simple at the same time! Holy cow, girl this is fabulous! Killed me again. me...

Hi there, Once again, wonderfully done. Your view of the world. I could read you all day... please never stop writing. me...

Hi there, you should quit your day job and start writing books of knowledge. So gifted are ye. I adore history and the pyramids and found this piece so informative, clear and easy to understand, I owe you a huge thanks for this piece!!! me... classify paleontologically the samples containing no shells,” which made them wonder where the stone from The Great Pyramid came from. In order to find out, the researchers compared the elements of The Great Pyramid with samples from twenty quarries and...

Hi there, well, you wanted me to get something from this, read the following clips... very well done! I don’t know. I’m a murderer and a coward. I suppose I deserve some kind of punishment. I believe that you have already paid for your crime. I can see that you have suffered. You’re not a bad man She haunts me. I can’t tell you how many times she‘s come to me in my dreams