jadedpoet's profile
AGE:
39
LOC: Grand Blanc, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 07
LOC: Grand Blanc, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 07
Very, very passionate about life, love… having seen the devil himself face to face i tend to lead a humble, simplistic life. Seems ironic then, that so many complex unending thoughts rampage thru my head, many of them falling onto paper…
please feel free to dip your quill into my inkwell…
just do not blame me for the permanency of its stains…
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depression is forever deep depression is filthy blackened dark is depression then the gasoline or be it the eternal spark are the flashes of resurrection just a continual mirrored reflection that occasional light seen at the end of lifes tunnel be it a simple magic trick with a flashlight and a funnel my mind cannot become a playground toy my brains juices continue to seep onto the dirty ground, along with its joy what happens when all is leaked out and nothing is left inside do ...
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i write with my quill from the puddling crimson ink well pumping quite steadily, into my right hand i write from the sitting position for the fluidic puncture i capture, no longer allows me to stand i write with the fruit that now runnith over, unable to decipher if i am any longer a man i write with the bleeding passion that leaks from the deepest reaches of my soul, for i finally can i write with new visions i have never for possessed, as climatic crimson circles my plan i write with...
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living and lying, bleeding and dying sitting and wearing in wonderment, while starring gleaming and shinning, decisive reclining slapped and forgiving, wondrously butchered misgivings soulful fulfillment equaling good measure, devils sister saying what is thy pleasure deprivations rolling, fragrances polling, which one will win selective answering, life nor death, wording deceptions, fooling no one but self frosted fires, captured winds… sounds corroded, hollows within beaming foresight chewi...
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you would think by now i would have all the answers by now i would have danced with all life’s dancers i would at least have figured out up from down would understand in my mirror… just who is this reflective clown recall so vividly in my bed when would met wood, tasting earth as the ground shook embedded memories now enslaved with all i gave… all they took these years on planet earth not absorbing smarter… only sponging up the dumb taste buds so raw, could once climax with a mere drip of her...
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Hi there, What can I say? It stirs my heart, my soul. I only felt one small error after reading it thru several times. The third stanza, second line. It makes more sendse to my mind if it read with a negative inserted. As " How can one not be able to grasp something that takes up so much space?". Go ahead, slap me if you must but it just makes more logical sense to me. Just because what you are grasping for is indeed so vast. I adore this piece, it's metaphorical illusions, it's deep passion,...
Hi there, I have written and posted, since removed most pieces I have written of our infamous 'politicians'. I looked this word up in Websters and holy shit, the common definition was 'professional criminal, gifted at leading the masses to slaughter, all the while filling their pockets with gold". I loved your wonderful Limerick. Write and post some more please! stu...
Hi there, I am pretty sure I read your previous poem on this subject. As you know I loved the other one but this shows a much deeper side to you. It does convey the same meaning but in such a much more complex and beautiful way. By you pulling in our celestial space it becomes so much more intriguing. What a wonderfully colourful, warm soul you possess. A true gift! me...
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