jadedpoet's profile

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AGE: 40
LOC: Norcross, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 02

Very, very passionate about life, love… having seen the devil himself face to face i tend to lead a humble, simplistic life. Seems ironic then, that so many complex unending thoughts rampage thru my head, many of them falling onto paper…

please feel free to dip your quill into my inkwell…
just do not blame me for the permanency of its stains…

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Poetry / perfectly crazy
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3 Reviews   4 Comments
if jaded were to choose location dead was the blood discovered thickened or watered scarlet red or be that of this writer’s bleak version of uncorrected spilling, lacking cleaver perversion cloaked the wanted, the wear, buy that strong oak bush from local greenhouse there couldn’t bee a honeys drip of more, maybe less than fifty 3, it does have a tear perfect, for nothing is ever perfect, dig it up and toss it into the truck, if thou could i will drive it (crazy) by trips end, dee...
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Poetry / split decision
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3 Reviews   9 Comments
  ever so gently cracking a smooth, pristine egg or cracking one’s enigmatical, enamored mind some are not unlike breaking open a tasty ripened walnut but without the usage of tools, utilizing words as a warmed laser others more likened to a sliver of chilled butter, temperature perfected carefully placed upon her oven warmed bread, seeping into each open pocket the complexity arises, if entrance is managed within the unpretentious action which river of passion do i true to my hear...
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he sits quietly in the darkened corner of her bedroom, unnoticed patiently he waits for just the perfect time, for her sleep to deepen as she settles in, he carefully moves his chair somewhat closer he notices how her long hair falls so delicately upon her satin pillow as he studies her supple skin about her face, looking for the slightest of flaws, none God has dropped an angel enigmatically from heaven itself he brings his right hand up and holds it firmly under his lower lip for the words ...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Vicious: A Fragile Creature
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Hi Sandi (japan) I do like what you have done here with your revisions. It is easier to read and absorb. I loved the term aqua. What a perfect place to enter in this dark but still visual piece. Many of your key words allow the reader to grasp your moving picture here. The bleak emotion entangled with lost passions of yesteryear blend perfectly. Like I need to tell you this, you already know it. Sandi, you paint wonderful pictures of your life, constantly blending reality with some entertaini...
Hi Kristi, This piece makes so much more sense arter I sat in the pilots seat and burned one. Nice job and see you og the return trip!
A unique topic that turned out quite well. i sense the thought that you have put into this and it came out perfectly. A thief is a thief is thief is a thief. Well done! me...