jabf's profile

I like that your choice of words defining your creative life are clear and ring true across many readers. I really enjoy that you say "stole" your creativity away, since your creative self is something you favor and nurture...but the fact that it's been stolen gives the reader a sense of longing, loss, and matter of factness.

I like the use of punctuation, and the meaning behind the statement. Good work.

Very joyful imagery through your good choice of words. Made me smile. Thanks! Good luck!

Evokes definite emotion through the powerful choice of words. Good luck.