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AGE: 26
LOC: Garden Grove, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 05

i write because i want to say something to the world.  

if my life was a work of fiction, upon my deathbed i would want hemingway to write the book, wes anderson to make the movie, and monet to paint the picture.

favorite poets:
billy collins
isaac rosenberg

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Awake! Awake! I knew summer was making its way to my house because the mockingbird was perched in the pine tree in my backyard. He was on Eastern Standard Time, but did not consider that as he called me awake with his raw melodies. I rolled my eyes from the dark ceiling and aimed them through the window pane at the tree branch by branch looking for his roost. Jealous that the sun could continue to sleep through such racket, I separate my body from my bed and drop my feet to the floor, followi...
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This Poem Is A String I remember when I first learned that my heart is a kite tied to the end of a string that the wind put in its pocket like some curious thing it picked up alongside the road. At the other end is your vigilant clasp and steady eye watching for any falter or dip that would send me tumbling to the earth. I remember the sound of your feet in the grass as you ran to toss me to the wind and the hands of the air rushing past the trees to catch me. Am I now, against this thick bl...
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Poetry / poem.6: "Hannah"
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Hannah Love is a palindrome with you&I at either end- equilibrium of candle-lit dinner plates that exists as we tangle our fingers like roots that follow our arms and bloom in our chests. were we not so juxtaposed we would simply be syllables and letters- yarn not yet knit into a sweater, two woolen lengths idle and nearby. And so we are- letters and syllables that hold hands and discuss the symmetry and beauty in spending the rest of our lives as a word that is closely woven and warmest in ...
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Poetry / poem.5: "Lovers"
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Lovers With her eyes she stabbed him repeatedly. Between them the silence cut far deeper than any knifed word could, and deeper than I could observe of this isolated impact crater that I could only guess was once her beating heart. I could not tell you what he said. I only just came upon them like this. Her porcelain eyes welled with the heavy tears that came from deep within her body where only a wounded lover’s soul bleeds. In one swift motion, graceless and shamed— and no sooner than I had...
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What God Has Joined Her soft hand trembled to finish every word Of every letter that ever cleaved heart from men In that deafening paradox every time unheard, Unforeseen, and always un-forgiven. And after charmed pursuits until men’s soles are worn, Polite platonicity is the slowest, sharpest tear That any man has ever had to mourn, the deepest weight any man has had to bear. An old man with white whiskered face— Solitary figure sits in the corner by the tree In the evening in a clean, well-l...
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Poetry / Life is Lonely
i like this poem. you use anaphora well, but change it slightly enough that it keeps up a progression without entirely disrupting the patterns this poem creates. the only thing i would have as criticism for this poem is that there is a lot of empty space. i know it is probably to emphasize the loneliness, but there is just so much that it starts getting difficult to connect the images that are used here because they're stretched pretty thin over the gaps. i think there is probably a better wa...
Poetry / Paradise Found
this poem is alright. the spacing and line breaks are kind of weird and that comma after "only gently" doesn't make much sense. i like that you refer to a langston hughes line, but then i was bummed you don't do much of anything with it. the poem doesn't dissect it or explore it very much, which leaves the reader asking 'what's the point?'. when using another writers work in your own, make sure you do so in a way that your own work gets the spotlight, which i don't think this poem does very w...
Poetry / sepia
this poem is alright, even though it almost has the tone of trying to hard to be a poem. some good imagery here, so what i mean is that it almost seems to be imagery for its own sake. also, the spacing seems odd and unnecessary. i guess that is all to say i don't get a sense of honesty from this poem (maybe because you use the notes for reviewer to plug some other website, so the whole thing comes off as some sort of commercial). so i guess the bottom line is that this poem sounds nice, but i...
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Short Story / Spirit Rage
i'm not sure i follow you here. the language you use to generate your imagery is very complex and looses a lot of meaning and power as the reader tries to figure out what you are trying to say. this is compounded by the fact that there is so little complimentary material to give context. is this a short story like it says at the top? it works much better as is when considered as a poem, but then as a poem the line breaks don't really work out that well. i think if you want this piece to reall...
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