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If you're 18, I'm 100. Or you're a friggen genius. The opening line got me straight off. I was about to switch off the page when I saw the Under 18 notice but "Light hated the screams." got me. This piece is almost poetic in quality, lyrical. I really like it. And I don't read ANY horror or vampire, ever. This is my first in fact, and again would have switched off when I saw where the story was going had your proses not been so beautiful. 18, humm.... Few things, minor at best. First, ground ...

I don't have the answer to your speculations, but I know that when I say I love you to my kids, or they say it to me, I can viserally feel the exchange most times. It's a bit like a dull static shock.

I liked it. It was lyrical, with a nice cadance to it. There was an element of whining to it for me that I didn't like though. Especially when you get to: -‘cause I am fucking broke And then the piece goes into how hard you work for it and how hard your life is as if this is unique or these are acceptable excuses for not doing anything to help the global cause for which you are touting. The voice of the piece also sounds like they believe themselves a victim. It made it hard to sympathize. We...