Nice article and very good point of veiw. I think about you. We leave in a lonely world, we need friends because and real life we can not find them! I can not write about grammar because i'm rookie in English Language. Keep writing! Cheers!

Good piece. I can not write abuot grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, but you wrote about a good theme, with soul and this is very important. We need read things like this to wake up! Keep writing! Cheers

It is possible feel in your words like a love hurt you. But the Time make good things with your heart. You need open your eyes to other. I can not write about Grammar because I'm rookie in English Language Keep writing (this will help you) Cheers

I really like your piece. I can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, but your words take my imaginations and make me fell inside a bar. Very good descriptions. Keep writing. Cheers!

you work with a peculiar structure to your text and this make your piece with nice flow. I can not write in English because I'm rookie in English Grammar. I'm sorry but I can not help you in "My life..."because some words in this sentence are unknow to me. Cheers!

I really love your piece. Short but truthfull. Keep writing! Cheers!

Good writing! Good style and nice flow. I'm can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, But You make me curious to visit a Gallery, but unhappy I'm live far in Brazil. Nice tribute to artist.

Very good story. I'm can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, but I'm realy appreciatte the way you finish a story. Some slangs i can not understand, but your piece has a nice flow. Keep writing!

I'm rokie in English language but I can feel like your poem sounds very good. Well writen have your own creative structure and nice flow. And, the most important:It's from the heart. Keep writing! Congratulations!