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AGE:
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LOC: Philippines
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 17
LOC: Philippines
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 17
Hi. I am Kray E. Shelf. Call me Kray. :)
I am an aspiring writer and a manic reader.
I love Jesus and hate grammatical errors.
I used to write poetry.
Figured out I sucked. :D haha
I’ll get back to it soon.
Maybe.
And I got my avatar form photobucket. Please don’t sue. ^^
Ok, so far my reviews have been subjective. That’s not a good thing, now, is it? Ok, ok. I’ll change that.
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Dear Bum, We hope you're enjoying your vacation. Because it will seem significantly shorter this time. Please understand, you are an incoming fourth year student. It's high time you think about your future and other matters of consequence; like your career, for starters. You have to enroll in a reputable university/college to convince the human resource department that you can actually work. No work, no pay. No pay, no food - if your parents are tired of carrying your weight, that is. No food...
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What Are poems But Lies Caked in Truth?
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What are Poems But Lies Caked in truth?
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Dear Bum, We hope you're enjoying your vacation. Because it will seem significantly shorter this time. Please understand, you are an incoming fourth year student. It's high time you think about your future and other matters of consequence; like your career, for starters. You have to enroll in a reputable university/college to convince the human resource department that you can actually work. No work, no pay. No pay, no food - if your parents are tired of carrying your weight, that is. No food...
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I like it. :) It's very entertaining. You have a few grammatical and continuity errors: "nobody was going to make me happy with the present" you see, "the" is a specific article. replace it with "a" since you're not talking about a specific present. "Clots" do you mean "Klutz"? "Yes. Now I remember you too. Am I clots?" how could he/she know what your main character was thinking about? "kill all your day with the service department." this sound kind of strange. But it's OK if you want to be s...
i don't know quite how to judge talent. 'cuz i think it's a matter of yes or no. :D:D anyway, this is good. Ü my only complaint is about the title. the song is kind of popular, you know.
Please insert line breaks between paragraphs. ^^; Very entertaining. I like the snippety style here, makes me go like "what happened to the other story?" It can be a little tiresome, though. But that's just me. Maybe. :) As for the last *** section, I... sort of... didn't get it. :O inconsistency issue: Cutenlexy25 vs. Cutenlexy45. which is it? other errors: "Purely for research mind you." = should be = Purely for research, mind you. "goes like this." = i', not sure about this one but i think...
is this finished? the ending was a little abrupt. ^^; nothing's really happened yet. i really like your first paragraph. it is engrossing, a good way to start your story. remember to put spaces after periods and commas. :) errors: whose seen = should be = who's seen (it's a contraction for "who has seen") im glad = should be = I'm glad ** "Besides all of that ,im glad to say that soon all ot that will be six feet under my feet" -- i don't understand this line. the phrase, "besides all that" w...
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