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AGE: 26
LOC: Pittsfield, MA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 07

I am currently working as the assistant manager at a small venue which has nightly music.  In addition, I am an experienced musician (20 years or so), specifically a composer, both of classical and “popular” genres.
as a result, most of the work i will be posting here will inevitably be lyrics, and more along the “popular” variety, as most classical music does not contain lyrics (and none of mine does— as of this date).
I wanted to be a writer when I was very young, and have always been attracted to the science-fiction genre, although I find a lot of the work in that field to be disappointing.  If I do submit any non-lyrical works, chances are they will fall under the heading of “sci-fi” in some way or another.
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Lyrics / cherryhole
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i felt the moon's eclipse chasing the dragon's breath and i, i tore your petals off and placed them in the flames she's like lightning hitting a church bell she turns beauty into pain she's really not as bad as all that just give her a chance, everybody else has she burned a cherryhole in the ground rested my head on a concrete cushion yeah, a cherryhole in my hand against the wall in the revolution, yeah no time to eliminate put me in a shadowbox and watch me stagnate i can walk on water wit...
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Lyrics / great offense
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7 Reviews   6 Comments
well, this is all i wanna know if you think you're so smart why don't you tell me if i'm human or not 'cause i don't think so oh, no, no, no well, you all make me sick to my cold, dead core if this is how it's gonna be i'll squash you like a dirty flea but fleas don't really bother me none so i'll kill you 'cause you're so dumb so don't you talk to me would you converse with a rat well, at least a rat is honest and not quite as fat i hate you for your crises that don't concern me i hate how y...
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Lyrics / out to lunch
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6 Reviews   2 Comments
wear your face on backwards every day/tell my mother i've gone away use my shoes in the proper way TO RUN, RUN, RUN, FAR AWAY trickle down, walk in line/lost my tongue first then my mind used my glasses, used the signs BUT I'M ALREADY LOST WHY YOU FRIGHTEN ME SO? AND WHY YOU GENTLY PULL? I DON'T SEEM TO HAVE A SOUL TO LUNCH ON you've got to scream [scream], scream [scream] scream to be heard/the only fight is all about words trivial bullshit 'bout which nobody fuckin' cares TURN AROUND THE CO...
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Lyrics / silubus envy
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5 Reviews   2 Comments
hickory licked up the spot/the mouse fell off the clock drunk fuck gone for a walk/down the liquor store punk rock don't wanna stop/it's a war cry luck can't clear out the rot/of social history cry, cry HAVOC in my head drown in fun 'til everyone is dead cry, cry MURDER in the street die like a man up on your feet christpuncher got in a fight/with a boxing nun carpetmunching all through the night/my tongue feel fuzzy little brother don't have the right/my sister's ugly motherfucker clawed out...
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admittedly, i am somewhat partial to the subject matter, being fond of writing symphonic (or symphonnic-sounding) music. but i really like the idea of this poem. you also have some awesome alliteration, particularly in the earlier stanzas: "dry heaving hellish hymns," and "a sacered [sic] silent deception," for example. you definitely have a "feel" for the sound of words. but this brings me to another point. There are a number of spelling errors in the piece which you might want to correct as...
Lyrics / Something More
I've been having a lot of trouble reviewing lyrics on this site. I just have difficulty hearing what the song is supposed to sound like, and really, based on lyrics alone, a song could be almost anything (so i kinda hope they eventually make it so that you can post a sound sample along with lyrics, but that's beside the point). You asked me to review you, so here it is. I noticed that, among other things, this contained the tag "punk." Now i don't know where the tags come from (you, random co...
Lyrics / Dream to Die
Your concept here is fine. I think you're probably having trouble putting music to it because you're trying to put music to IT. I know there are many schools of thought on this, but in my experience it is very difficult to take a piece that was strictly written on the page and set it to music, unless the piece in question was written by William Shakespeare. But you're not Shakespeare, and neither am i, and, in fact, no one is 100% certain that Shakespeare was Shakespeare, but that's beside th...
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I will admit, to start, that i am not by any means a poet. At best i am a lyricist, but mostly just a musician. I'm not sure i have the right background to understand this poem properly. I like the overall shape and texture of the poem, as well as its rhythm, but i am confused as to the meaning behind the curious usage of capitalization and punctuation. Specifically, i really enjoyed the image of a body composed of millions of tiny cells, and then later you speak of "Skin," and the use of the...
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This is the first rough translation i have received: Bed of the Monster Under my bed Is a monster He likes to guard over me And smell my feet Sometimes she intimidates me But my dog guards me My dog is my hero That is man's friend ( female dog " lass") I like the sound of the poem in Russian, it definitely loses some of it's feel and, i imagine, its meaning in the translation. If iwere to treat this like a piece written in English, it is definitely unique in that it discusses subject matter w...
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