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LOC: Lake City, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
LOC: Lake City, AR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
It’s hard to describe yourself, so I’ll tell you what my 2 children say about me. They say I am an “old hippie”, all of their friends say I am “the coolest mom ever”, and my husband is constantly telling me to grow up and act my age. I think I’ll just stay the way I am…feeling like an 18-yr-old at heart, going to all the local rock concerts, doing some drawing, oil painting, and writing. That’s me. That’s who I am.
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My heart is as heavy as a cement block my soul has left me to join another flock my time is running out---tick-tock, tick-tock Will someone else step up and gently knock? Give me my heart and soul back! My body aches because of their lack. Give me my damn heart and soul back! It's time for you to cut me some slack! How could I have seen you through rose-colored glasses? My heart will never mend from these deep, jagged gashes. Now you try to hurt me with your verbal lashes But I'll burn in hel...
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I thought we were friends; friends don’t let you down. I thought we were friends; friends don’t let you drown. I thought we were friends; friends don’t leave without a sound. I thought we were friends; friends never lie. I thought we were friends; you, my friend, helped me die.
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I thought we were friends, But friends don't let you down. I thought we were friends, But friends don't let you drown. I thought we were friends, But friends don't leave without a sound. I thought we were friends, But friends never lie. I thought we were friends, But you, my friend, helped me die.
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The pain in my heart Throbs down into The pit of my Stomach. Hurt feelings Are not good Even though they were never intended or even known about. They can be Almost traumatizing Almost horrendous Almost catastrophic.
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My heart is as heavy as a cement block my soul has left me to join another flock my time is running out---tick-tock, tick-tock Will someone else step up and gently knock? Give me my heart and soul back! My body aches because of their lack. Give me my damn heart and soul back! It's time for you to cut me some slack! How could I have seen you through rose-colored glasses? My heart will never mend from these deep, jagged gashes. Now you try to hurt me with your verbal lashes But I'll burn in hel...
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This, I truly understand. Without music, how does one get through a day? I loved these lines: "This lack of music, this lack of breath; I would rather accept an earlier death." I would like to know why there was a gunshot though. Also, did you mean to have the word 'piecing'...or is it supposed to be 'piercing? I'm sure you meant to have piercing there. Other than wondering why there was a gunshot, I liked this.
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I really liked this poem because my life is relating to it so much right now. I can feel the lonliness and the pain and the "Why me?" inside of the writer. I have passed many, many days like this here lately, wondering where the hell my time is going as it starts getting dark outside. Maybe this Lonely Figure and I can both feel a little better knowing that we are not alone in our sadness.
I've always loved willow trees, the way the branches bend. If they are really old trees and truly filled out, they make a heavenly place to sit and let your mind wander for hours. I wonder if this poem was written while the author sat beneath a willow tree? Comparing a willow tree to love is very acceptable to me. The only thing I think needs changing is the word willow needs to be capitallized each time it is used in this poem. There are four times where it is not capitallized, and I think i...
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