incogneato13's profile
AGE:
23
LOC: Jacksonville, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 16
LOC: Jacksonville, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 16
Shit happens; everyday and we all step in it! I don’t let the little things get to me, i just deal with it calmly.
I’m a writer, a poet to be more precise. I’ve been trying to get my stuff out there to see what people think. I want to know how I stuck-up compared to others and if my poetry is considered any good.
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Vulnerable to your attacks. I am now a mess. You have crippled in every way possible Can't eat, can't sleep, won't walk, won't talk. All I do is think. You are my thoughts. I lay in a coma. In a black hole deep within my depression. Happiness is the greatest illusion!
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Vulnerable to your attacks. I am now a mess. You have crippled in every way possible Can't eat, can't sleep, won't walk, won't talk. All I do is think. You are my thoughts. I lay in a coma. In a black hole deep within my depression. Happiness is the greatest illusion!
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Glorious colors strewn about; the sky, painted as the sun peeks out
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Stowed away in the dark damp corner; Wait to be taken out and played with like some old decrepit toy. Everyone has left you to be there all alone. Then finally you see a dwindling light off in the distance; A speckle of hope arises from within. A thought, "Maybe they want me, it could be my time to shine." For a brief moment the feeling of joy is awakened. Oh, how wonderful, all the attention focused on me. Then, a dreadful realization, Here comes something better and here I go back into soli...
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Round and Round in circles we go It won't stop until I blow Implosion; explosion, which will it be The destruction of you Or destruction of me I can only wonder how tis will end almost for sure there will be no friend A foe to you I will become when this heated passion is won I'm mad with you Your sad with me Or so you think Think of what you said to me The things you'd do And the places you'd be Broken words for the last time I don't want hear another lie I will sever this tie from you I and...
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I'd liked to hear the music that goes to the song(if you have it yet) so I can get the full effect. I really like the way you tell the story, how each verse gives just a little more but you don't tell the meaning 'till the end. I would really, really like to read more of your work!!
First off, it makes no sense, I felt lost after I read it. Haiku/Senryu have rules to them and you need to learn what they are. There is supposed to be a reference to nature or the season its about.
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