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AGE:
48
LOC: Myrtle Beach, SC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 28
LOC: Myrtle Beach, SC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 28
I do not take any reveiws serious. This is for a few reasons.
1. Please do not give me any reveiws. For one, I do not read them, for two, if I did, the outcome of my work would not change just because you reveiwed it, and commented on it. I am only in Urbis because I was invited by my daughter. She thought that the poems and short stories about her should be shared with the world. I do not sell my work. I write for my children, I do not write for a reveiw.
I will not say the name of the individual, but they left me a reveiw stating that they thought my poem about Daniel Boone is just a portion of what should be a short story, and they thought it would be nice if it were just that. Thanks, but I like it the way that it is. Why? Because…
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The poem is both cute, and simple. I was quit sure what the story was about once I read the words "Butterfly", repeated four times. And as soon as I saw that it was repeated over and over, I knew my children had lost interest once they walked away and sat in front of the T.V. watching the weather channel. Though I think that you have potential, I think that you should read this to a child and watch their response, I am sure you have talent, but you must right the worlds within you, not the wo...
I found that it was merely one good thought towards a wonderful idea for a poem, and that the rest of the words could have been arranged a thousands different ways, and still start and finish within one line. The idea is wonderful. The beginning and the end were much of the same. I am not even close to being a true writer, but I would guarantee you would lose a childs interest before the first period. Good luck
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