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AGE: 17
LOC: Sandpoint, ID
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 12

Hey! I’m Brenda and I’m attempting to write to see if I have some talent. I’m new to it all so don’t be too harsh with the reviews!

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Poetry / My little secret
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Dark secrets and depression You guess those are just some of life’s many lessons. Hiding at night not knowing if you're too afraid to fight. If you do will you win or loose? Winning is like living for eternity. Losing is like death slowly taking your last whispers of breath. Staring into the darkness Not knowing what you'll find. Looking for a secret, a soul... What do you have in mind? An angel looking over you? Or one of Satan’s many demons trying to take over you? What will you do? What if...
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Romance / Ch. 1 {Loveless}
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The long silent pause seemed as if it had lasted a century or more. It was the longest minute of my entire life. Every important moment that happened from three years ago up until now flashed before my eyes. I knew it, we both did. There was not going to be any memories of mine that would include him. Today will be the last day, the last memory. “Please, don’t go.” I hesitated. “You don’t understand. I need you.” I tried to sound convincing in the least way. “You’re making this harder than it...
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Dialogue: Britney Spears & Queen Elizabeth “Oh it’s you again.” Mistress Spears spat at the Queen of England herself. “The pleasure is all mine. Please, do take a seat at the end of the dining table.” Her Majesty threw over her shoulder as she walked to her golden throne at the head of the table. “I will sit where I please, which is next to the King himself.” She said coolly. “Pardon me for misunderstanding your statement, Mistress Spears, But I shall and will be the only lady to sit by the ...
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Poetry / Gone
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Gone The walls were melting into a green and blue liquid, obviously from the melting paint. The colors began to combine into a tie-die, until they completely came together and formed an ugly brown color. Paper was crumbling from the walls and forming a thick pile of ash upon the floor. Pictures were falling from the now brown walls in a slow motion, before hitting the hard wood floor and shattering the glass. The commotion was all too sudden; there wasn't even any sound to fill the atmosphere...
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Children's / Drama Queen
I really liked this. It does sound like your typical drama queen. This girl sounds like she is maybe 11-13? I don't know what age you picked... I just know that I did not have a cell phone till I was 15. I'm 16 now. But you are right, there are kids out there now with them. Thanks for sharing this! It made me smile!
Haiku/Senryu / Banking
Very clever! Made me giggle. It is so simple, and makes so much sense! Thank you for sharing!
Poetry / Listen Up!
By the way that you wrote this piece and the amazing words you chose it is apparent that this meant a lot to you. I just wish I knew who you were talking about. Whos mind is gone?! Good job and thank you for sharing.
Excellent work here. I picture a woman holding onto a clothes line for her life during a great storm. I liked you choice of words as well. Good job and thank you for sharing!
Haiku/Senryu / Lost Harvest
This was a very good piece. I liked your word choices, they helped me to visualize your work. It is very sad, and has a story to tell. Thank you for sharing.
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