Wow, I give this a 9.999. I think its wonderful. My one critique is that you could maybe switch the tense, and describe more of your feelings. Other than that I thinks its great!

I thought that the idea of it was interesting. I think maybe it could use a little re-wording. In the sentence "But before you can walk of course your going to fall" You need to replace your with you're.

I thought the concept was interesting, though you may want to make a few grammar changes. Most of the fragments you may want to go back and revise, such as: "grinding etching a crimson line". You may want to change that to "grinding as it etches a crimson line." or "grinding, etching a crimson line.". I love the concept, but think you could improve by revising it.

I really really love this one! I think that how you described the changes, and described the seasons so well. I think one thing you can improve on is HOW you learned and WHAT you learned. Overall, I thought it was great and can't wait to see how you improve.

I thought this one was great, and hilarious. You may consider going over it and revising some of the fragments. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, such as "Isn't a duck". You could leave it as is, but I would change it to "It isn't a duck". Other than that, you may want to add a conclusion.

I love this poem. I love how you used sensory details to create a picture in the readers mind. I think maybe you could incorporate more of this, by showing that beauty is more than just a sight. Maybe you could say what beauty feels like, how a smell could portray beauty, like perfume. Or perhaps you could sequence it into a year, day, minute, etc... You could describe the perfection and beauty of that moment. I really loved how you described someone, as being beautiful. Maybe you could compa...

Hmmmm...A bit confusing but I get the point. I don't really get it when you say "cleansed my a skimmed milk sky". Are you describing surroundings? I like the details you put about honey-golden tears, but still unclear about the swallows. Don't take all my suggestions, it is only a Haiku, and you can only fit so much into a few words!

I liked this one! There are a few things that are hard to relate to the main idea of the poem, such as "Frost-bitten banana skins, twisted seedlings". I get the general picture, but I'm still a little unclear on the meaning. But, I loved it! Great job!!!