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AGE: 27
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
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Haiku/Senryu / A Leak in the Roof
by Anonymous
Pretty silly, and it doesn't scan well.
Poetry / I can't win
by bllsht2
It's clever, simple, and fun. The cadence could be improved by reading it out loud several times, I think. For instance, the last line could just be "that guy superman". Also, when you put: Iv’e got the lead you should move the apostrophe to before the V
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