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AGE:
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LOC: Marion, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 12
LOC: Marion, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 12
I wanna write and get feed back. I wanna expand how my mind works. If you don’t have constructive criticism please do not share hateful things we r all here for the same purpose. If you wanna know something else please ask me. :)
Teresa
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A humbled me begins to fade I am worried for the thoughts of my life For they are passing me by Sodden I realize Disease spreads throughout my body The I created is lost forever as my body weighs me down to the great abyss I give a great performance As an uncontrollable desire to shriek Haunts my inner being The Gods have cursed me! The puppet masters can not keep me here I plead I scramble to keep my head above water Treading deep in the lost spaces I assume the impossibl...
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The trials humans face are more real today than ever before. We have to strive for better. The storms pass almost as fast as they come. After you take the first sweet breathe of life after the rain it seems as tho it clouds again. I know life is hard but i have the knowledge I am gonna need in this life. We all have the light it takes to shine thru the dark moments life throws at us. Simply because we are homo sapiens we have the power to acknowledge we have a chance to change whatever...
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You can choose darkness over the light You can have the rain and live in the sun Your darkest moments shared the one person you cared for most The light touches my heart While the sun warms it As it becomes day the truth is told The one to share with everything is still there Running into the rain Discovering many new things Love is what brings you back inside Also drives you away at the same time Scared with fear of hurt it ran Always drawn back The sun shines on us again &nbs...
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Looking at the sky Laying under the stars I realize I am not alone How could I be with love so strong Fireflies light the night around us Every second no energy is used Yet I feel exhausted Gentle breezes pass us by Calm and relaxed, just listening to the sounds Deep breathes Hearts racing Having me entirely As those minutes ticked on Time for us stopped Nothing else mattered Never dreamed laying here Blood flowing ever so rapidly Melting away to nothing Paradise lit by nothing but magic Out ...
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Should one consider itself crazy, If it consults itself for answers? Does discussing what to write to ask such a question count? What defines the insane? How can persons remain sane if that is their classification? How about, are you crazy? What is normal? How do we know love is the same emotion experienced in the same way in every human? What defines the first cut? Is it always the deepest? How can we depict the truth from compulsive liars? I dont guess we can. I know I ...
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I like the piece as a whole. The individual parts flow together. I loved the line "you'll find I cannot be created in the Sims". How true also a fan of "here lies timeless hopeless romantics" Great piece!
Wow! So many goos lines here... Spurring others to find there foes, Luring more to read my prose. To ease a mind of regretful past thought, Is something necessary, though seldom sought. As you can see it divides your mind's voice, Leaving you with many, when should only be one choice. You see me not, but my voice rings clear, Ignored a lot, but let it be known I am here... I think this line is my favorite. :) Be you, be the real you, that is why you are here, You cannot accomplish this when s...
I like this piece. You have a talent. I do suggest tho if you sont mind that you post another chapter sooner rather than later? I love the idea that cops can be magical and use it for the greater good :) Keep writing I wanna see more! great Job!
has a spooky undertone. The words are used in a great way tho :) Good Good
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