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Review Unlocked / Poetry / In Her Hair

by ParadisPerdu at 12:25 PM EST

"It does read like a list of private hells and horrors. As poetry, I thin..."

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Review Unlocked / Poetry / In Her Hair

by ParadisPerdu at 12:25 PM EST

"Wow...there's so much here to digest. You have an incredible use of imag..."

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Review Unlocked / Lyrics / "This Song's For You"

by cooljim102055 at 12:25 PM EST

"Not bad. Two things I noticed, though.... "We all felt the romance"- Her..."

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Review Unlocked / Quotes / 9 word quote

by cooljim102055 at 12:25 PM EST

"Not bad. Without the commas it's Yogi Berra funny. With the commas it ta..."

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Review Completed / Young Adult / The Mimc - Chapter 1

by decemberskye at 12:25 PM EST

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Review Unlocked / Flash Fiction / The Muse.

by jakuper at 12:25 PM EST

"I'm not too sure what 'lines of abundance' are. I've had a look on Googl..."

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Review Unlocked / Flash Fiction / The Muse.

by jakuper at 12:25 PM EST

"Consider skipping (thinking in progress) and all the dashes. Typo - 'inn..."

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Comment Added / Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Silk Bullet

by Matthewtuckey at 12:25 PM EST

"I tried doing the whole thing in present tense to give it some immediacy..."

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Review Unlocked / Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Silk Bullet

by Matthewtuckey at 12:25 PM EST

"Okay, I'm having the inevitable flashes of the Terminator, which you've ..."

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Review Completed / Short Story / Go Wild With Expectation

by Matthewtuckey at 12:25 PM EST

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Review Completed / Flash Fiction / The Flame (Emptying Spaces)

by Matthewtuckey at 12:25 PM EST

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Review Unlocked / Poetry / filled with space

by Deadsage at 12:25 PM EST

"this piece lacks clarity. i cant gather what your trying to say and im g..."

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Review Unlocked / Poetry / filled with space

by Deadsage at 12:25 PM EST

"excellent piece of poetry expressing fragility of mind and its weakness ..."

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Review Unlocked / Poetry / filled with space

by Deadsage at 12:25 PM EST

"One of the first things I thought while reading this piece was the exces..."

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Review Unlocked / Poetry / filled with space

by Deadsage at 12:25 PM EST

"I Like this attempt at criticizing one's self through the analyzation of..."

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