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This is an interesting view into the psyche of a liar/drug user. I love how you have the person (let's just say him) has another person who's trying to get him to stop, yet it doesn't work. I actually like that the poem doesn't have a "happy ending". Makes the poem stand out (and makes it more real). I especially liked the ending lines: "I'm simply frightened So I lie Hiding from reality". Only thing I would say is, make it clearer if this guy's a drug user AND a liar, just a liar that gets h...