Oh my... This was, simply put, amazing. I love the way you put it into a perspective that pertains to everyone. I liked your refrencing to robots, constantly doing and saying as we're told, because that is so true. I loved it!!! Gio

I really enjoyed this. It captivated me from the very beginning. THere were a few misspellings, but that is very understandable. One part I didn't quite understand though... "but few seldom know...". That line lost me. Would you mind explaining you wording for me? Overall, It was wonderful. Gio

I understand where this is coming from. The feeling is just there, and it is so passionate. I have been in this situation before and these lyrics re-capture it perfectly. I liked the last stanza "A tear bleeds red in the waiting Bruises kiss her pale white face As trembling feet stroke the fount Set me free" THe lines here are so vivid, I can see these things in my mind. I love it. Gio

A few grammaical errors, but I enjoyed it. It brought up old memories, some good, some not so good, but overall I really liked it. -Gio

Wow. There isn't much I can say to that. It was entrancing. I had to reread it several times. It is powerful, and aside from punctuation, flawless. -Gio

I liked the way you referred to nature, and how you refrence and mould that into whatever it needs to be. -Gio

I do not understand how you would classify this as even close to Emo... It is a story of opinionated conversation, and That has nothing to do with Emo... Would you care to elaborate on this for me?? -Gio

Wow... I loved this... In the beginning, where Megan asks Tommy what they are going to do, and he thinks to himself that the question was limitless. I really enjoyed that view... Good job... :) -Gio

Wow. I liked the rhyming. It makes it flow. I really enjoyed the way you used insanity as something to be desired. It gives it an odd quality, that I must say, is rather nice. Overall, thumbs up. Very nice. LR