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What did i do, I know i did nothing, I love her with all my heart, i lay there next to her, and she says i cant do this, my thoughts were lost, i could not say anything, right after we were intement, laying there wondering, Why, Why doses she have to leave, The hope in my heart is lost, she not doing anything about it, its not right at all, really is there reasen for this, the keys of my life have been stolen from me, Relashionships seem like sand in my hands, falling and slipping from grasps...
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How much would it change the fact Would the idea of it be diffrent How much feeling would differ In what dream did we slide through Through how we think of it Asking them if the thoughts were right Waching you slip through the grasps What is home to us but a shelter Forced to walk through the depths Who was anybody that counted Cut in to a world of dreams Crimson was the blood that was shed Sownds were that were faint but loud Strapped to a routine of madness Having what we wanted but none Ti...
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As days go by i see nothing in her i do not love Hours pass as we talk and we dont even know it We know we'll never get into fights and As time passes and we see nothing else matters But each other loveing longer Love isn't a word anymore but a feeling and emotion, though we have been together for almost eight months, and we are closer than we were ever But as we see each other more we have nothing to hide from each other, Although we might be young we love on another more than evber and more...
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No matter what i do i cant get her out of my head, All the dreams, all the thoughts and fealing i have for her, I love her and thats all i can say, nothing less The dreams i tell her,the thoughts i tell her She has some for me, everything i do i do it for her Nothing in this world would change who i love No one would get between us, I love her for what she is, every one else loved just her I dont think eny one else was right for her but me, I know she loves me, nothing would change her mind, ...
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I quietly walked to her room, I nelt by her bed and just looked at her, Waching her sleep,staring at her beauty, I nudged her just a little bit, Then she woke, "How long were you trying to get me up?" "Not long", i repiled I put my hand on her bed, She opened hers, she put hers in my hand, We held on to each other forever it seemeed, But she moved and she put her head on my arm, And still holding on to my hand, "Tired?" she asked, "No" I said, (I only had 2 hours of sleep), While she was on a...
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I quietly walked to her room, I nelt by her bed and just looked at her, Waching her sleep,staring at her beauty, I nudged her just a little bit, Then she woke, "How long were you trying to get me up?" "Not long", i repiled I put my hand on her bed, She opened hers, she put hers in my hand, We held on to each other forever it seemeed, But she moved and she put her head on my arm, And still holding on to my hand, "Tired?" she asked, "No" I said, (I only had 2 hours of sleep), While she was on a...
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When the world ends there will be more. More tears than you can imagine. More tears than when a mother loses her unborn child because eomeone hit her. More tears than when a young boy gets hit by a car when he gets off the bus on his way home from school. But why these tears? Why are we all so surprised? We have known this was going to happen. Why do you act so innocent? You knew this was going to happen. You knew what you were doing. Why didn't you stop when you could have? Why do you say it...
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The world around me is changing but I seem to stay the same. When in actuality I change just as much and hope one thing remains. I hope you stay in my life, forever here to help. So that you can explain things that I don't understand. While in my darkest hour, when all is lost, you are at my side. And in doing so, in being there, you earn my utmost respect and admiration. You make me want to run away and be with you always. Your voice makes me melt. Your sweet melodic tone all but puts me to ...
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The changes that we go through seem meaningless and dumb. But if you think about it you will realize that changes are very important to your life. With each change comes the memory of how things were before that change. With each new child the world becomes more full of life, and there is a little more poverty. With each death, each tragedy, we realize how important the little things are. Like how your mother used to make you breakfast and let you eat in bed when you were home sick. Or how yo...
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These tears that fall, fall for you. I don't know how much longer I can take it. I'm running on empty. Hanging by a thread. You caught me off guard. So perfect, compared to my imperfection. When I saw you, I couldn't breathe. When I first heard your voice, my heart stopped. Then it beat for you. Don't take it away. I'm lying to myself saying it will all be okay. You tell me everything will work out. Don't make it look so pretty. I hold the tears back as long as I can. Then waterfalls pour fro...
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