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AGE: 15
LOC: Fairview, WV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23

I am just a girl. I don’t stand out in the crowd, I will not be voted prom queen. No things will be dedicated to me and my name will be forgotten in time. The only things that need to be known are that I love deeper, I have hurt more and I will cherish life so much more because I am waiting, ever so patiently, for fate to step in, grab my small white hands and lead me to the life which was destined to be mine. Love potions, magic wand, romance novel- $86.98, Perfect dress, hairstyle and shoes for prom – $3,086.47, Living for what you love – PRICELESS

Maybe hoping is fatal. There is only so much a heart can take!

~ “Invisible Love”

“Hypothetical situation… suppose I were to just jump off a cliff; would you run to the bottom t…

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Poetry / Just Married
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From that moment when we met I knew that I would not forget That you and I were going to be And that somehow you loved me You love me for my many flaws And picked me for them one and all And when I grow a tail and horns Or when I look and feel forlorn Tell me why you love me true And that will bring me back to you When I'm looking old and gray Tell me I'm beautiful anyway I know this love is something nice That can't be fraud or put on ice And in the end I'll be looking behind Smiling, knowin...
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Novel Treatments / Jewish for a Summer
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Jewish for a Summer Chapter One The year was 1944 and the Nazis were in control of Germany. Adolf Hitler was in command of the Third Reich and the Jews were being persecuted throughout Europe. One by one, Polish, German and Hungarian towns were being ambushed by the SS and Nazi soldiers. Jewish families, some of which were the best people you would ever meet, left, never to be seen again. There were but a few towns, the summer before the liberation, that had been untouched by the death angel...
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Short Story / Sailing
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Sailing: An Abridged Excerpt from Six Months By: Ashley Riffle Nick and Persephaniah were like two peas in a pod, becoming inseperable since they first had met. He gave her the freedom to drop her curtains of solitude and made her feel part of something. She gave him the power to break out of his shy exterior and come into a pool of courage. Nick would have never asked anyone to do anything with him, but this was Persey. He mustered up all of the determination inside his small soccer-built bo...
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Short Story / Sailing
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Sailing: An Abridged Excerpt from Six Months By: Ashley Riffle After the auspicious meeting at the mall, Persephaniah and Nick were inseparable. They talked to each other every night and it was all Nick could do to pull his courage to ask Persey to his school’s dance. With a little persuasion, Mr. and Mrs. Collment agreed to let their daughter attend. After Persey called Nick, letting him know she was allowed to go, the phone rang again, simultaneously. It was Nicholas’s doctor calling to del...
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A new year arises briskly Creating angst throughout my being Hoping to lure me into a sense of security New times, new mistakes to make If I could sing about my hurt Then would you listen? Your songs play thorough my head And in every lyric I hear you saying hello Because before this year dawned I couldn't take the ghostly goodbye You were here one day Producing a fever in my soul One like no other I suppose now I should tell you what I feel I want to forgive you But through the madness I sti...
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Poetry / Embrace
This poem is fantastic. The imagry is without a doubt amazing. You have quite a knack for giving the reader a clear picture to envision while reading your pieces. Thanks for the read. Look forward to reading more from you!
Poetry / The Call
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For starters, I LOVE the note to reviewers!!! I agree with your statements!! And finally, the poem was fantastic. It opens up the mind to recognizing some problems in the world and you used AMAZING descripton. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
This was without a doubt an amazing poem! You have spectacular description abilities. You brought a deepness and darkness to something that opened my eyes to what I am currently feeling. You are a fantastic poet. I saw nothing wrong with the piece. Thanks for sharing!!
Quotes / Witty?
This has to be one of the most interesting opening sentences I would have ever read! Indeed, it is quite witty and in fact it makes me laugh. Very funny. Thanks for this! Hope to read this story of yours...