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AGE: 17
LOC: Fairview, WV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 10

I am just a girl. I don’t stand out in the crowd, I will not be voted prom queen. No things will be dedicated to me and my name will be forgotten in time. The only things that need to be known are that I love deeper, I have hurt more and I will cherish life so much more because I am waiting, ever so patiently, for fate to step in, grab my small white hands and lead me to the life which was destined to be mine. Love potions, magic wand, romance novel- $86.98, Perfect dress, hairstyle and shoes for prom – $3,086.47, Living for what you love – PRICELESS

Maybe hoping is fatal. There is only so much a heart can take!

~ “Invisible Love”

“Hypothetical situation… suppose I were to just jump off a cliff; would you run to the bottom t…

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Lyrics / Back to You No More
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I failed myself when I fell for you Cried my heart to sleep night after night The dawning of a new day still can't help me now After all, it's another dark day I lay helpless I'm lost in a wanting I don't want - lost in wanting you And failure awaits time after time I hold my breath and pray I close my case You are always on my mind Every second is like a never-ending lifetime You can't let me escape your bond Because bonded you try not to be You're never going to go... you're never going to ...
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Lyrics / The Craving [for you]
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Opened to darkness I was captivated by light Resonating high from you Beginning and End Forever is not too far away My hunger, my thirst Can I resist the urge The means to your end By the power within Will I ever be enough? {Chorus} Despite the cold and the rain Through waters deep as black You shocked this heart dead To beating eternally By your grace, survived I Through the sand and the storm An eye, baby, for an eye I dare your feet Move closer to mine The envy of the monster R...
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Poetry / Please Rescue Me
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You could kiss me or release me Cripple or defeat me However time may fly, it's still unsure I don't live for today because tomorrow should be brighter I can't be positive you won't break me But I know that there's a sincere thought on your mind I know I don't make sense, but neither do my feelings I fall and I shatter because it's all I've left to do If I asked you to do it, would you? I want to be sincerely yours,       Please rescue me, before I rescue myself
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Poetry / Just Married
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From that moment when we met I knew that I would not forget That you and I were going to be And that somehow you loved me You love me for my many flaws And picked me for them one and all And when I grow a tail and horns Or when I look and feel forlorn Tell me why you love me true And that will bring me back to you When I'm looking old and gray Tell me I'm beautiful anyway I know this love is something nice That can't be fraud or put on ice And in the end I'll be looking behind Smiling, knowin...
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Novel Treatments / Jewish for a Summer
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Jewish for a Summer Chapter One The year was 1944 and the Nazis were in control of Germany. Adolf Hitler was in command of the Third Reich and the Jews were being persecuted throughout Europe. One by one, Polish, German and Hungarian towns were being ambushed by the SS and Nazi soldiers. Jewish families, some of which were the best people you would ever meet, left, never to be seen again. There were but a few towns, the summer before the liberation, that had been untouched by the death angel...
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Romance / OH, THE GIRLS ALL GET PRETTIER AT CLOSING TIME
by agudwun
This was so well done! I am astonished! You did so well with the incorporation of dialect that it really brought the piece to life. I very much liked the raunchy humor. It was utterly fantastic. I didn't see any thing in particular that needed changed - of course I kept grammar out of the mixture because you can't grammatically correct dialect. I can barely imagine where the piece stemmed from on your imagination spectrum. Bravo.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Memories
by Jimmel104
This completely sums up how I've been feeling. I love when you said, "We are here only for a moment. But in the end, a moment is enough." It almost makes more sense to live moment by moment according to what you said. I very much liked this entry.If someone were meant to critique it, they would find no mistakes, grammatically or in the overall clarity.
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Poetry / Flame and the Moth
by Jimmel104
I have only one word. WOW. The piece is simply fantastic. The description, the imagery... I think MY heart fluttered. It was spectacular. I saw no errors when I read through it. It is definitely one of my favorites. "Remembering their time together and the warmth of his touch when he held her, loved her. Still it was. Brief, tender, the ancient and the beautiful moth never to be forever,but always to be near." What a way to end such an amazing poem. It is definitely one of my favorites. I loo...
Lyrics / Suicide by Cop
by MrJawbreakingEquilibrium
The lyrics are very well written. I see this as more of a poem than actual lyrics, however, they have great description and I only saw one spelling error that was just a typo (Thet needs to be They) but I didn't see anything else that jumped out at me except the insightfulness. Thank you very much for a great read. I look forward to reading more from you soon.
Poetry / To Live with a Broken Heart
by CynicGod
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