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AGE:
18
LOC: Hutchins, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 19
LOC: Hutchins, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 19
Ive been writing since Before middle school.
I like almond joys and all kinda teas.
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i mss your eyes, i miss your laugh, and looking at theses pictures cant bring back half of the joy we shared. but do you really care? the question is a killer. a parasite in my heart slowly eating away. can you honestly say we mattered at all? or was i just another game. 'did you care?' the question is a killer. youre all i think about, but what an amazing contrast, you dont even remember my name.
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I put myself on this altar for you, built from all these years of hate and contempt. So here I am baby, youres to disect and torture all over again. I see the sparkle in your eye as you slide the scapal down my chest, placing a gernade where my heart used to beat. Pulling the pin and ducking for cover. But I've been waiting for this moment! I roll off the gernie, on to you. And in a second I see your sparkle and smile fade to fear and surprise. As I fucking explode right on top of you. Imma a...
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The thunder roars and cracks like never before, trees thrash and moan, as dogs and birds scurry for shelter. Its not long till the rain begins, and when it rains it pours. But here I am in this filling gutter, clawing to escape but only digging myself deeper. If it keeps on raining my body will break. And as the water comes to my neck I accept defeat and close my eyes, but suddenly the sun pierces the black skies, stopping the rain and shining some ray of hope into my desperate situation. I l...
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The thunder roars and cracks like never before, trees thrash and moan, as dogs and birds scurry run for shelter. Its not long till the rain begins, and when it rains it pours. But here I am in this filling gutter, clawing to escape but only digging myself deeper. If it keeps on raining my body will break. And as the water comes to my neck I accept defeat and close my eyes, but suddenly the sun pierces the black skies, stopping the rain and shining some ray of hope into my desperate situation....
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Chapter one, were dying, youre screaming, Im bleeding, and this life is going out of season. Flip a page to chapter two. After the decay, bones are breaking and Im gone. Take a look at chapter 3. Theres no one around to hold you close, theres no light light to shed, this is my haunting soul's revenge. Darkness swallows us whole, now I'm sure htis is the end.
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whoa, I'm really loving this. I love how youre life, and love and views, (althought not exactly stated) are changing with and like the seasons! I just got done reading a partially similiar poem. I love the sense of nature and time. You had me from the opening. I new favorite of mine :)
wow, I mean wow, This is verry inspirational to me. i like the style and feel of it. this is always how Ive wanted to write, a bit of natural sense in the midst of metaphors and ideas. I give you tens al over the board. Hope to see more soon.
I absolutely love this. So deep and full of simple understanding, I could almost feel a certain beat as I read. The ending coming back to the begining tone was also a nice touch. All together you tell(and vividly describe) an awesome story through , what i would definetly call, clever and talented writing. :)
i really like this i strongly appreciate how you keep it simple but meaningful im a very anylize words kinda person, but not tooo much. i like also like the contrats /pos and neg "Trust is built And is broken" love this part. :)
I want to say XD and :( at the same time It most deffenitly had a comedic tone (I hope that swhat it was meant for) I cant honestly say i understood it at first glance but a few read overs help me understand. Overall i say cool and more sarcastically funny. "And the last thought in my head was that Valium had nothing on my fucking cat." Loves this last line.
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