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AGE: 23
LOC: El Paso, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12

i’m not aspiring. i just am. i write, using my words as my one form of currency.

in college, majoring in print media.

dream job? write for The New York Times and open up my own poetry cafe in NYC.

fan of:
coffee
Cortazar
typewriters
thrift shops
polaroids
anything green

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Poetry / the bench
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a man who once thought he was worth nothing, sat down and had a coffee with me today. his hat was older than i was. he had an ethnic nose, we sat and posed for an invisible audience in a park full of pigeons and wet grass. i stared at an ugly mural, crossing my legs. i was in awe of his roadmapped face. his wrinkles were fascinating, he must have had a million. i thought more than once of laying rice paper on his face and tracing with a piece of coal. his hands were twice the size of mine. "T...
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i can only wonder who this is about. i loved the way you described time, and i was able to feel the irony in this one. she has to take what's being given to her in the way it's being given. her situation, although ironic, is real i felt this. i am a fan of this.
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i wish this wouldn't have rhymed. i think it would have been more effective if it didn't. to me, it's a bit cheesy; i get that there are true feelings of sadness here, but be more real about it and don't sugarcoat so much. just let it out.
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