This is lovely. There are several ways to interpret what you may have meant by it. I love it because we as humans are "true" and real but, sometimes we put on our masks or a show when it is most necessary. Very creative...

Oh my God. Wow. How absolutely disgusting and yet, so vivid and real. I wanted you to keep going by the time I got to the end. It was slightly erotic and at the same time disrespectful. I couldn't stop reading it and I beggg you to continue!!!!!

My favorite line: He wasn’t going through her things or digging in her drawers or looking to find damning evidence or subtle clues to her psychology. PERFECTLY STATED. This guy named Worth is like a woman. He seems to think like a woman and Sarah behaves much like a man. Wow, I loved how everything you described was so real and so simple, from the clanging of the ice, to the dustbunnies of cat hair rolling across the floor, and how a dog typically pitter patters behind its owner. Oh there wer...

Your raw content never ceases to amaze me. I was baffled by the last line because the sock had not yet been personified... wait wait.. there is another word for that and it's on the tip of my tongue... hmm... it's too late to think about it (now it's going to bother me until I fall asleep). After thinking about it for a while, I felt sorry for the sock after it gained character. I can relate to many times when I had to throw a sock away and did not want to. I would have rather put it to use s...

Hahah. This is perfect (coming from a counselor). You couldn't have said it any better in six words. I love the hmmm... imagery in this? I don't think that's what it's called; I've yet to remember... but the idea of something first being taken away, then something being given, and something being recieved as a result of both is clever...