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AGE: 35
LOC: Columbia, SC
GEN: Male
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Short Story / Left Coast Karma
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I hadn’t seen Kevin in forever. He got scooped up by Karma and swept off to California to work on some super-secret project involving world domination and, for all we knew, time travel. He was the lone wolf, the alpha geek and, oddly, the party animal in our cadre of college friends. Considering all that, I was surprised when he told me he was getting married. You know how it is, right? Your cell phone rings, or, more likely, your email dings. You see this name on the screen, one that ...
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Humor/Satire / A Million Monkeys Typing
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Flash Fiction / Philip, Clean and Whole
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SENDER: Joseph SUBJECT: Come back Please come back, Philip. I don’t know where you’ve gone. I’m looking everywhere. So my name is Philip, he thought. He didn’t know who Joseph was. He didn’t know much of anything else either. He pressed Delete. He saw the city for the first time, unburdened by memories. Is this what being born is like? A hum began deep in his chest, a tune he had no words for. It swelled and burst into unashamed song. People all around stopped to...
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Flash Fiction / Philip, Clean and Whole
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SENDER: Joseph SUBJECT: Come back Please come back, Philip. I don’t know where you’ve gone. I’m looking everywhere. So my name is Philip, he thought. He didn’t know who Joseph was. He didn’t know much of anything else either. He pressed Delete. He saw the city for the first time, unburdened by memories. Is this what being born is like? A hum began deep in his chest, a tune he had no words for. It swelled and burst into unashamed song. People all around stopped to...
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Short Story / Left Coast Karma
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 I hadn’t seen Kevin in forever. He got scooped up by Karma and swept off to California to work on some super-secret project involving world domination and, for all we knew, time travel. He was the lone wolf, the alpha geek and, oddly, the party animal in our cadre of college friends. Considering all that, I was surprised when he told me he was getting married. You know how it is, right? Your cell phone rings, or, more likely, your email dings. You see this name on the screen, one ...
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Haiku/Senryu / The death hunt
Cute! I like the second line, would probably change 'hunts' to 'prowls' or 'stalks' in the first, and the third could be tighter.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / All A-Twitter
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Short Story / The Cake
Clever. Is it a poem or a short story? Great imagery, but could probably be cut down 100 words and pack more punch. Myself, I'd like to have my cake and eat it too :)
Non-fiction / Write On!
You say a lot in just six words. I like. I had to read it a couple of times to get it, but "no matter". Bonus points for the rhyme and two-word sentence symmetry.
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