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AGE:
55
LOC: Rochester, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 17
LOC: Rochester, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 17
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I am Dan W Griffith, and I try to write short stories. I just finished my first book: SIMPLE…
“Some Fact, Some Fun, Some Fiction”
I can’t seem to get the knack of this catching an agent, editor, or publisher
yet either.I got rejections from them all, yet none of them have read one single word I’ve written. I guess my name should be, Oprah, Joe the Plumer,or Lance Armstrong. Are these people writers or just famous? Oh Well!
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...there’s GOD to be a better way…..
.....dan w griffith…................
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Word count: 408 Daniel W Griffith SIMPLE ...
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word count: 823 The Letter, Why? by Daniel W Griffith Mrs. Nowarever I feel compelled to write you over a matter that has been haunting and tormenting me for the last five years. I feel my soul has been damned, and God will never forgive me, neither may you. The nightmares of that day never end, and as loud as I can scream to God, there seems never to be any closure. With all my heart and what is left of my soul, I am truly sorry for what I am about to divulge to you. About si...
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Sounds like the old abacus with Alzheimer's put the MAC. on freeze malfunction. I guess size does matter. Mac. should have took a picture of the poster with the cell phone, sent it by internet and let In-Hawn print a larger copy. Delete or at least EDIT.
I got a rise in my Levis! AND you say this was your first sex piece. It kept my attention, but it didn't flow well. The sentences were short and choppy. It felt rushed as though you were trying to catch your breath. I like longer sentences. I'm horney. I got a hard on. Bite it. Now. I stuck it in. You pushed it out. Good job
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I liked this Flash Fiction/Story. only 1 mistake and it was so small I almost missed it; there should be a period after...to reassure herself. This part is just me, but I think I would change the word Father to Daddy. It would show a bit more of a little girl emotional devotion to a troubling higher power. Good Job/lucky
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