It should be noted that the reports of Plato and Xenophon often conflict, and Scholars have often had to come to conclusions based on their interpretations. It should be noted that the reports of Plato and Xenophon often conflict, and scholars have often based their conclusions on interpretations of these writings. However, I have recently come across some highly neglected accounts of Socrates’ last minutes, and I have decided that I will detail the final moments of his life so there is a bet...

For those of you who… You have an unneccessary space between of and you. …we worry about everything (cats, dogs, geraniums, etc.)… spell out Years and year. Sundays we fight… Take out “over” “Survivor Mental Health” : my daughter in the middle… …and fell six stories… extra space between “feel” and “six”. ..I got kidded by … A friend joked me …affective disorders—sd … What is “sd”? In these days of political …. extra space between “days” and “of”. …feeling the next.morning. You have period aft...

A trip to my Grandfather’s house had always been boring until I discovered the peacefulness of the creek. …until I discovered how peaceful the creek (near his house/behind his)… A breeze caused the the warm summer air to fill with the sound of rustling foliage and the smell of freshly cut grass and flowers. A frog jumped into the creek shattered reflection, which returned a few seconds later. I began to wonder if I should climb to safety. The sun returned from behind…. “I would take out Once ...

First, I feel a ring of racism in this. "Nigger" and "Blacky" stick out. Second, this work has too many run-on sentences and fragmented sentences. The read horribly and are terribly confusing. No one should ahve to read a sentence three times to try and figure out what you are referring to. Third, the story is entertaining, but hard to read because of the above comments. Fourth, you misuse the colon (:) on several occassions. Fifth, you tell the reader that you are 14 years old over and over....

Burroughs isn't going to get very far using lines like that.

…rest of the surroundings. As always, …. Too many spaces between the end of the first sentence and the following one. …really is of no matter, but …. This sounds ambiguious. “really does not matter” What are you supposed to talk about when you don’t talk about love? Using talk twice in the same sentence is repetitive. What are you supposed to talk about when you do not discuss love? What did Raymond Carver know about love anyway? I do not know who Raymond Carver is and I am not about to look ...

….decaying organic matter, I …. Only organic matter decays. “organic” is not needed. … creep down this God-forsaken …. “creep down” implies a descent, but I do no think or feel you were moving downhill. “creep through” …it is sickening in the most foul way! This is repetitive. Anything sickening is foul and you really do not need to say “in the most foul way!” …with rotten tree and grasses, though… rotten trees and…. I run and run and then I run no more…. I understand the prose, but I do not ...