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Glory Besieged Rise of the Infernal .:Table of Contents:. Prologue Chapter I Chapter II Prologue The cold, winter air seeped through the small openings in the old, oak cottage walls. Inside this cottage, a young mother poured her last few ounces of life into giving birth. After many pushes and sobs of pain later, a beautiful baby boy was crying in the arms of the doctor. He checked the mother’s vitals. By his estimation, she would only have about five more minutes to live. He walked to her si...
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HA! I understand! This must be Saul/Paul. When blinded by God on his way to persecute. At least that's what I thought. I could be wrong. The overall clarity wasn't amazing at first. I thought some of the line breaks were in the wrong places. But I do get the message and that's what I like in poetry.
That was.... interesting. This type of poetry isn't usually a favorite of mine. But you might be able to pull it off. I usually like poetry with some message of doom or something behind it. A poem about a man and his I don't know... wet dream? isn't my favorite.
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