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LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 10
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 10
I love reading and am hoping that it makes me a better writer. I find inspiration in all things around me. Currently I’m working on a couple of movie script ideas and co-wrote a book on motion graphics back in 2006.
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I really hate this waiting room. The walls are stained and there is no art on the walls. How can there not be art on the walls? What does she expect me to look at while I wait for her to finish up the appointment before mine? Old issues of Varity and Time Out, and the corners are furled up from being touched far too many times by far too many patients. Gross, this one has a damp spot, no doubt from the obsessive compulsive with the time slot before mine. Why can’t she just … &ldq...
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decades of memories wrinkle her hands to touch her lover sleeping at her side communication through the power of feel energy draining from her fingertips the stars speak volumes of words but the moon remains silent the rhythmic breathing of the metronome gently rocks the silks hanging in the window
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nueral paths with blue trim a film of moisture blocks the way embrionic fluid crosses through but the rat knaws on the strings the double doors swing open light pours into the darkness dust flies off the yellowed keys but the rhythmic sound of breathing holds steady
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This is a strong main character. She is sad, withdrawn and a bit selfish. You have written her in a way though that is not too intense and it's easy to get a feel for her through her actions throughout the story. This reminds me a lot of Russell Banks and his characters. We do feel for them, but also think they should get what they deserve for their actions. This is how I feel about this character, although I am happy that she got through the border at the end, mostly b/c she had her niece wi...
You have some beautiful lines in here -- "yesterday's mascara running down her face" and "she's in love with a memory".
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