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AGE: 19
LOC: West Palm Beach, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 05

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Young Adult / The Bar: Chapter One
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When that man stumbled into the bar, in his undeniable stupor, I know that it was my time to leave. Either that, or have another drink. His gait was unmistakably antalgic, as though his knee were bothering him because of a complication he was either too poor or lazy to correct by means of a hospital. His eyes drifted around in his head as he looked around, desperate to recognize a single face from his alcohol-dependent past. People murmured as he shuffled to the bartender on the right side of...
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Very nice. Great vocabulary usage. It gives off a message of shunning criticisms to follow your own unique path. A poem about the struggle to do what you want. Nice job.
Short Story / FUCK PREPS
Well that was interesting to say the least.
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