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I thought this was a very good read. Typically I like shorter poems but I actually found myself wanting to read more of this. I don't think I found anything about this that I didn't like. Thanks for the good read!

I am a sucker for good flow so obviously I liked this one. I loved the build and mystery element. The ending was great. Well done. Thanks for the read!

The first line woke me up and I really enjoyed this piece. I loved the flow and phrasing. My favorite had to be "Staying true to a true staying promise" not sure why but I loved the way it was written. The only thing I had issues with would be the last 2 lines. They felt a little out of sync to me..but otherwise I thougth this was awesome.

I loved the imagery and mood of this. My favorite line was "Fallen red and yellow, to forgotten brown" The flow was really good, but to me it was thrown off just a tiny bit at the end.