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AGE: 24
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 23

A spite for bull and a fetish for beauty and valor – my vices are my motives for art. My motive for being on URBIS, on the other hand, is a compliance to my goal. My goal is to free as many minds as I can from ungrounded beliefs. To do this I learn to write. I bow to you – masters of Word, for it is Word that Was First, and it is only Word that will Be. Aside from serious intentions, I try to paint beauty by using the written art. Alas I am even farther from that little selfish goal, than from the grand one. I thank all those who help me master the great art. And – no – I am not always full of bull. And – yes – whatever you say about my writing I can and will take seriously and gratefully.

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Poetry / A Whale Folly
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A sitting whale once said to me - We are all FREE! Lets BURN the SEA! I cried : "What folly, You burn the sea - you burn all glory! Who then is left for all to see? And how is being dead so free?" "I do not listen to closed minds, You are RESTRICTED. You're not WISE! And I do not need someone to see That I'll be free when we burn the sea!"
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Poetry / Truth and Us
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a junkyard I see of failed illusions. we swim in conclusions while drowning out truth.   I Look; I Shut My Eyes -So Pain full Is The Sight: Broken Spirits Sure of Lies Do Not Try To See The Wise.   Manifest Destiny Gripping at Robes. White KKK Dancing 'round Flames. Hungry for Justice Anger Prevails.   Striding through Choices Of Mass Deprivation. Blaming Consumerism For Fall of Nation. Ignorance's Sucked Flesh off of Faces,   Not Touching Truth But Baring Rage. An Ancient...
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Poetry / Foreign Aid
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A gut wrenching sound of guts wrenching, Bullets gutting, skin separating: All for the greater good Lets find the wrong one Lets make them suffer All for the greater good I'll turn that knife inside your belly Ripping your child-bearing organs You don't deserve them You're not like us You cause your people suffering We are TRUTH. Don't show me your tears Let them fall on the ones you weep for Drown! Look – you aren't the cause Of your problems - Your government is. We are here to...
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Poetry / Six Words Knifed In To Heart
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How to see without others' eyes?
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Poetry / Go
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What's in five years Set and spent On reckless tiring of self? A soul well spent Is not the same As when before this simple game. What's in a marriage That's charades Around a wreck of wedding bands.. A neck well turned Shuts out the sight Of all the problems that we might. A bridge, once crossed, has no return - A marriage, Unity of souls... If it not set upon a stone Than once upon The head will turn And see the pedestal of twigs... And never more put on the wigs Of happiness it wore. You h...
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Poetry / Sculpture Stretched Across My Bed
by goofygoober168
It's very sensual. I really like the "opposite wall" written on the opposite side. The ending, though, seems a bit too physical.
Poetry / How to Write
by MrJawbreakingEquilibrium
You sum up the mechanics of the creative process pretty well. I think it suits the purpose and makes good use of 6 words.
Poetry / Bathed in His Light
by derekosborne
It's very emotional, I can feel the agony of someone witnessing untimely death. The flow is impressive as well. I would add more imagery at the end - feelings and ideas have more power when shown, not told.
Short Story / casual visit
by malyshka
It sounds like a very interesting beginning of a story! I'd like to read more though. A coach in the front yard sounds interesting, did you mean couch? In any case, it adds a sense of mystery to the story. Also, from the story I understand that the man is out on a date with his daughter, whom he calls a friend, comes over quite often, and sees the mother of the girl often too... Is this how it is meant?
Poetry / A Sign For You
by Moons_sprite
"or like I’ve been used." - I'd change "like" to "that" at minimum. At maximum - reword the whole phrase. The stanza before the last needs rewording - maybe take out "truly"? I like that the language is simple and yet used creatively: "I’ve learned this once when I wore a younger girl’s shoes.". The poem makes me sympathize with the author starting with that phrase. I think if you reworded "I know very well, that these things just don’t last", I'd be pulled in earlier!
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