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Ah, debt, that ugly Old Greg. And, as you may well know, not a monogamous lover. Freeze tag is free and just as fun as you remember. Very real comment on a writer's life. I usually write to not think about those sorts of things (or at least displace the problems onto characters I can guiltlessly kill).
I don't know - Abba makes every day a holiday. The perfect cure-all that's better than mojo, happiness, and earthquakes put together. Nice six-words - set the Schadenfreude snowball rolling.
A box of rain will ease the pain - I enjoyed researching depersonalization disorder, though I'm sure I'd much less enjoy experiencing it - unless I could switch it on and off at will - that might be cool. I'm sorry, I don't mean to make light of your condition. I'm happy that you're able to hold on to something that holds so much meaning. A triumphant six words.
Awesome - I hope you are too busy getting busy to read this, but if not, why aren't you off doing what everyone else on this site wishes they were? Perhaps it's unfair to speak so generally . . . but I certainly speak for myself.
Starbucks puts me off, but I do agree. Ah, for a writer to die, and finally know what it doesn't feel like to be celebrated.
Inspiring and maybe the best that six words can do. But isn't there really a better word for 'spirit'? What exactly do you mean by 'spirit'? By what means do you access it to know that it is indeed 'soaring'? What does it feel like to have YOUR spirit soar? I'm tired of mine, frankly - why else would I be reading? :) Like I said, though - six words is a clever trap to have to escape from, and for what your six words say, I agree with you.
Six sad words, yes - but sadly, I don't want to be sad - but maybe I do, a certain kind of sad . . . this is generic sad. Refund this review if you'd like, but my honest advice is to start from the drawing board and think about why.
Great progression. Really there are only a couple of words that you might look at revising to better this guy's impact. The first is "woes" - I feel there's a better word that could go here . . . "woes" seems too general - I can't tell you what to replace it with - there are a lot of directions it could go. Then there's the title of the third vingette, which I feel should reference its being the 'last' rather than the 'third.' It might add meaning considering the content of the third thing. O...
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