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LOC: Nigeria
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 15
LOC: Nigeria
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 15
I’m passionate about sharing knowledge or ideas that uplift the human spirit. I believe human beings are a loose chain of free atoms, and that we all can make the experience of life worth its salt through caring and sharing. These are some of the ideals I try to reflect in my writing.
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The modern world is on the brink of collapse because of the abuse of natural law and resources. Man's inhumanity to man worries the Guardians of the universe who realign forces to save the earth, or at least, clean the Augean stables for a new civilization--the Titan Race. Netu Deo is that child of destiny, chosen to save the world from the same physical and spiritual corruption that was the fate of Atlantis, a great civilization that sprawled the earth twenty-five thousand years ago. The con...
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Dear Agent, The modern world is on the brink of collapse because of man’s abuse of natural law. This worries the Guardians of the Universe who make moves to save her, and repopulate a new humanity. Netu Deo is that child of destiny. In carrying out the Guardians’ grand design, Netu encounters a wreath of vengeance that dates back to Atlantis. This is TITAN RACE the story of the fight for the lost civilization of Atlantis. The concept of a futuristic civilization from mankind’s distant past is...
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Dear Agent, The modern world is on the brink of collapse because of man’s abuse of natural law. This worries the Guardians of the Universe who make moves to save her, and repopulate a new humanity. Netu Deo is that child of destiny. In carrying out the Guardians' grande design, Netu encounters a wreath of vengeance that dates back to Atlantis. This is TITAN RACE the story of the fight for the lost civilization of Atlantis. “Just look at this beautiful civilization we have here – what would an...
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No more a spectre of daring stunt, Time wisened pilot of swift silverbird, Sky legend, hero of war's fierce brunt, Your bravery was once our respite from sinister silverbird- No more shall the brazen crackers sound, and loins gird- The scathed dawn was but your vaulted stage And your script played out: soon it's a new bird High over the sphere warbling of your new page. But no, your voice's drone we still hear, right here, Boundless rhythms of compassion echo among the living, Huge fruits of ...
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I set out in search of an extraordinary man, Yet I found only an ordinary man Doing ordinary things in extraordinary ways; Neither a genie, nor a giant But conscious of his potential; Through the power of his creative imagination, Generates lofty visions, great hopes and desires. The impossible are the stuff of his visions, In the incredible lies his fervent beliefs So he achieves the extraordinary, And on the rungs of the superhumans he's placed, An icon we admire and look up to. I set out i...
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The rejection the revolutionary Louise Byrant felt must be harrowing from the thematic concerns of the poem. Rejection, however, is a something we cannot run away from no matter how we perceive. In this poem, it takes prominence, and the way it has been weaved, makes it interesting. Poetic licence is richly used. The diction is apt in terms of registers. I hardly can find any flaw. Keep it up.
I think the flow is good. The magic smile is working well from the lyrics, but "I may not fit your pattern of what I'm supposed to do" could be shortened to meet the flow of other line, except you intend it as a bridge.
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Angus' Beef is a hilarious piece. You wit glared from the very beginning when the protagonist described how fat he was. Then Gar! and his threats of murder sent the chills up my spine. However, I don't get the feel of a sci-fi from the pages i've read so far. Is something missing? What with the registers of sci-fi? I'll suggest you pay particular attention to sci-fi registers; perhaps you are saving the best for the last. Keep the pages as racy as possible.
Dreamscape is entertaining, and I had a sweel time reading it. However, stanza 3 seems a deviation from the narration of the persona, which started enchantingly from the onset. Is a new persona talking here ? Or is that I don't get the drift? I'm also not at ease with the rhythm in stanzas 3-6, I mean, the length when compared to the preceding stanzas. Look at the flow of stanza 1, it makes one ponder so deeply. My suggestion is that you give stanzas 3-6 same bite as stanza 1. Good work!
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