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I really liked this - which is really something, considering that 90% of the time I can't stand poetry. Especially free-form; for some reason it tends to get frustratingly repetitive and bogged down in obscure, lyrical tangents that are barely relevant to the central theme or actual subject of the poem. This poem was descriptive without being redundant or inane, I thought, and descriptive though it was, managed to maintain a pleasant brevity. I thought some of the line breaks were awkward and...