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AGE: 21
LOC: Sulphur Springs, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 21

Hello! What’s up?!
I’m just a wannabe writer looking to sharpen her skills and get some feedback. This is my first time really doing something like this…. and I hope for this to be a learning experience. Hopefully in the future, I want to be a well known writer with a unique and different style. My goal is to make people laugh and enjoy my writing. If I made at least one person laugh and enjoy themselves, then the world will be a better place.
Peace. Love. Harmony,
Much Love.
Erica

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Short Story / candy
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used to think of men like I thought of candy. When I looked at there skin tone different flavors would come to my mind. Like when I was watchin' shirtless boys playin' on the bastketball courst I would think.... Peanut Butter, Carmal, Hershey's kiss, cocoa puffsm chocolate milk, dark chocolate..... need I go on. The different flavors of the guys skin would make me go out of my mind. I don't have to tell you that all the guys were black. Well..... I'm black. So aren't I supposed to be attract...
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Short Story / Pass no judgement
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10 Reviews   1 Comment
" What the hell is his problem?" he says, " He gets on my freakin' nerves!" "Why?" I said to him, " Because he doesn't talk?" He doesn't talk because he watched his mother burn alive because his psycho brother wanted to know the meaning of life. Aparently he came up that the meaning of life is death so he killed her to put meaning in her life. At the same time he also ended it. So I don't say anything about him. He's just misunderstood. People look at him and all they see is this black guy wi...
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Short Story / Jay's cat can talk
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" You wanna know a secret?" Jay said to me. He looked like he really had something to say. "What?" I said to him. Most of it was out of curiosity and the other half was expectation that the niggah was gonna say somethin' that was beyond stupid. "My cat can talk." he said. I looked at the niggah like he was crazy. Did this fool just say that his cat could talk? I've heard weirder.... but its was mostly from that crazy whiteboy who sits beside me in AP Psychology. I didn't realize at the time t...
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"Who the hell took my snickers bar?!" I yelled at the top of my lungs. The whole class fell silent in less than a second. Everybody had turned to look at me. Oh shit. That was the first thought that had popped into my head. I clamped my hand over my mouth so fast that my lips stung, but it was too late. I had brought attention to myself. That was one thing that I did not want to do. I did not want to bring attention to myself. I'm black..... but this was my first time in an all black school. ...
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Poetry / Denial
That's tragic. I love the ending most of all. It clarifies all the feelings and thoughts that was seen from the beginning. This is very sad.
Haiku/Senryu / Winter Silhouette
Beautiful.
Poetry / Enchanted Pleas
I loved it. You can just feel the passion in the words along with everything else.
Poetry / I See You Dad
It's very thought provoking. Deep. Very cool.
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