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Version 5
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My minds needs a rest because that’s the best. If only I knew how to control my mind, my thoughts, my angry moods, I would be able to sleep better too. I go to to bed when I’m tired and wake up late. That’s something that I hate. I always debate with what I could do. So I just sit there and type without a clue. I look at the clock and it’s after two. I get up and get my bed ready. Always wondering how long till I fall asleep, or when it will over come me. S...
Version 1
3 Reviews
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I am stressed, stressed stressed right down to the vest. I pace and I pace with my heart quite racing. Oh, I can´t sit or stand! No, I can´t sit and stand! My mind´s so racing as I keep on pacing. Oh, I try so to sit, but I can´t! Yes, I try, but I shan´t! So I stand!!!
Version 1
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Ive been in silent pain since i was 13, confused and dazed as I go. I feel it in my chest and my soul, I wonder how far this will go, before I brake and shatter like glass. All my life I have gone threw this, I always wonder when this will end. I am so tired of it all, I could just fall into little peaces and just wait for someone to come and sweep me away. I always want to scream and shout at everyone about everything just to get it all out. Ive lived threw...
Version 1
3 Reviews
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Have You Ever Been Me? I wish you could be me for one day and feel what I feel. My world is full of phantoms, Once filled with color and texture drained into dark and colorless. Maybe you have seen these apparitions too Loneliness seems to be my only friend I live in silence. Have you ever listened to nothingness? I try to express my feeling in prose A cry for help I suppose. Is this what you do sometimes? I grieve for something that has no name. Maybe you can relate. I try not...
Version 2
7 Reviews
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Life as a Future Writer I’m tired of all work and no play. I Sit before my computer and study all day I eat, drink, and visit friends whenever I can. Then im back to square one again. I finally make it home and give it a rest. So that I’ll be alert when I take my tests. It seems that studying is all I do anymore I get up groggy, get dressed and go out the door I am off again to my learning institution. I really have to work to maintain my constitutio...
Version 5
6 Reviews
2 Comments
STRESSFUL PAIN My minds going berserk as I try and read my book. My mind feels unrestrained with my stressful pain. I hope I can regain to my normal state of mind. But with school on my brain, I'm in pain all the time. People don't understand me and think me unkind. So what am I to do this time? How am I suppost to unwind from this stressful pain all the time?
Version 1
10 Reviews
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I'm new at this as you can see. I'm new at this as could be. Some people like my rhymes Some think I need more time to work. They have said to read some books. It's hard to sit and think, without any previous work. With writing my poems, its hard to not repeat. It's easyer for me to put together sort, simply, easy and sweet. But I doubt this is any better, then my other three. I know Im not with the times, I know I need to read some rhymes. I know I need alot of work, to read some poem books...
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