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AGE: 24
LOC: Red Bank, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 07

22 y.o. in New England.  I currently have a screenplay and two novels (general fiction & sci-fi) in progress…with no end in site!  Life is busy but I enjoy art and writing very much.

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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Novikova Project: chapter 1 part 1
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-CHAPTER ONE The chapel was empty except for the napping attendant and the stoic lady in black. Her hands were folded, ankles crossed and her brown eyes stared at her black boots, rather than at the open casket. The man she hadn’t seen in ten years lay in front of her. She had caught a glimpse of his face when entering the room but had sat down a few rows back, afraid. Her brow twitched and her nostrils flared with the reminiscence of what happened to cause this hard luck. Lucy wasn’t the typ...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Untitled
by redflames
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Wolf Blood: Prologue
by lovelypandora
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The firstchapter of my novel...
by Deon
Very nice writing, and a very clever way of introducing the main character via an interview! I was immediately sucked into who this character is and intrigued by his nepostic fame. You weaved in his attentiveness with his agent--honestly, I thought that they might be in/have had a relationship and that he was being a slightly obsessive boyfriend/exboyfriend (or to-be boyfriend!). But I'm sure that will all be explained in due time. Also, my first impression was that he was being interviewed f...
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / THE HOSPITAL
by oyodlerrr
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Action Adventure / Untitled
by CelestialAlchemist
First, the little things: minor spellcheck error! 'thrust -->st her head,”Ha!!” ' And also a little confused about where you describe that her ear 'migrated to the top of her skull'..? It might just be my ignorance, and you did well not to go into details--you've probably already explained it earlier! and grammar: 'where (should be 'were') directions.' But overall, good pace. Quick fighting scenes are hard to write and you didn't stray from the fight itself, and I could see everything bein...
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