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AGE: 23
LOC: Tacoma, WA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 29

I’m terrible with grammar, oh god why am I trying to write…

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Short Story / The fall of GMI
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August 5th, 2014: After many years of competition, a deal is struck between Google and Microsoft, the companies would merge under the combination name Google-Microsoft Industries. March 2015: Google-Microsoft Industries creates a hardware R&D department. June 14th, 2016: Google-Microsoft Industries announces the development of a 128-bit multi-core processor that is 56x faster than any currently on the market. February 1st, 2018: Google-Microsoft Industries announces the creation of a new oper...
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Horror / untitled horror 2006 #1
by Lena17
I liked it, it was descriptive yet didn't seem constipated. Nice imagery and word choice. I only wish there was some more :]
Criticism / Six Word Memoir
by hypatia
Thats a colorful description, heh heh. I get the feeling it's supposed to be kind of a frantic thing, if that's the case, "Ladling" doesn't really seem like a hectic enough word. Good stuff though.
Humor/Satire / Making a Deal with the Dew: Bottle Cap Blues
by Charley_Groth
It gave me a smile. I loved the way you described it as though it was the most vile thing in existence, then flipped it around. Guilty pleasure. Now I want one.
Short Story / Sold Out: six-word memoir contest
by akelly10
Concise, but I guess with six words you have to be, heh. It's an idea that could be expanded upon for a full story.
Short Story / The Gang's All Here
by TheApostate
I found that in some of the sections there was too much describing of people's actions, sometimes there would be three people's name in a sentence. It felt a little cluttered in those sections, however it improved more as the story went along. Another thing I found strange was the diction of the characters. For gang members they seemed to have a large and intricate vocabulary. It seemed strange and kind of prevented full immersion in the story. Perhaps you did it on purpose and I just don't u...
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Novel Treatments / DA Drake Chp 1 Final
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Twisted Oak Chapter Six
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Humor/Satire / Making a Deal with the Dew: Bottle Cap Blues
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Non-fiction / Chicano
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