i really loved the lfe and livng to die in the poem there are many ideas in your work that are very well thought out i have never by any means given a review to any one elses work so i am an amateur at best but certain lines really gave me goosebumps it was very easy to visualize many of the lines i hope that my truthful review of your work is worhty of your creation have a good night and thank you for choosing me

i thank you for writing and the opportuinity to review your work although i am not a professional reviewer i spend most of my time writing i appreciate the writing community as a whole even reviewers hahaha i hear your voice in your writing and through your thoughts visualize perhaps what may be the sights and sounds that inspired you work i am glad to have had the opportunity to review such a great poem thank you

i think the letter seemed kind of forced and hurried it should me reviewed by an editor as well as by your self if it is to get your foot into the door of a publisihing house any monies spent on it would be well worth the expense if it gets picked up thank you for the chance to read your letter i am not a professional reviewer good luck to you

I really feel like I heard your voice , and was able to visualize your words. I enjoy reading the works of others. I will admit that I am not so great at critiquing others. I enjoyed reading your words keep up the good work, and thank you most of all for sharing them with us.

I thought it was predictable and a bit cliche. Good attempt at humour though hope to see more funny stuff.