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LOC: Glendale, CA
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LAST LOGIN: July 23
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I am writing, for my self every day now. It seems to make no difference whether there is some thing to write about, or not. I have put it into my head that I must, or have got to force my self to do it at times. I was always afraid of turning writing into some thing that I must make my self do, how ever I think my life has changed that, and now writing does not seem like such a bad thing to do. I could be doing some thing that I hate doing for some one who does not care a thing for me. This i...
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I am writing, for my self every day now. It seems to make no difference whether there is some thing to write about, or not. I have put it into my head that I must, or have got to force my self to do it at times. I was always afraid of turning writing into some thing that I must make my self do, how ever I think my life has changed that, and now writing does not seem like such a bad thing to do. I could be doing some thing that I hate doing for some one who does not care a thing for me. This ...
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Straddled and crushed under the weight of a song with no words maybe even left for dead
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a good while has passed since I have seen your face or your smile tried to hold out till I finally heard your voice singing your own song thought I could wait for ever which turned out to perhaps be too long so much so that I could not or would not believe that this is you standing in front of me unable to speak unable to move it is not weakness it is the mind summing up the event realizing that you are not in fact a figment of the imagination realizing your reality then looking for the fami...
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I thought it was predictable and a bit cliche. Good attempt at humour though hope to see more funny stuff.
I really feel like I heard your voice , and was able to visualize your words. I enjoy reading the works of others. I will admit that I am not so great at critiquing others. I enjoyed reading your words keep up the good work, and thank you most of all for sharing them with us.
i think the letter seemed kind of forced and hurried it should me reviewed by an editor as well as by your self if it is to get your foot into the door of a publisihing house any monies spent on it would be well worth the expense if it gets picked up thank you for the chance to read your letter i am not a professional reviewer good luck to you
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i thank you for writing and the opportuinity to review your work although i am not a professional reviewer i spend most of my time writing i appreciate the writing community as a whole even reviewers hahaha i hear your voice in your writing and through your thoughts visualize perhaps what may be the sights and sounds that inspired you work i am glad to have had the opportunity to review such a great poem thank you
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