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LOC: Landing, NJ
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LAST LOGIN: July 01
LOC: Landing, NJ
GEN: Female
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If she steps into your eyes, she knows she’ll not return forever left to yearn, forever left to burn. Sweet toffee sunrise set beyond the moon forever is forever, and forever’s too soon. Feeding off the sun’s forever orange glow when there’s nothing left to hide and there’s nothing more to show and the idleness of moment is almost next to spent it’s last to be the sun’s saccharine lament. Fidelity of innocence is only so far gone and with a different hand, a new destiny is drawn the lines a l...
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Haha, I love this! It's very cute and lighthearted. I like how it starts out seeming dramatic as if something really horrible had been committed but the last line made me smile. :)
I understand what you're saying here because there was and may still be a time in my life where I felt like this, too. I really like the way you wrote this and split up the lines the way you did. The imagery is also very clear and in-depth. I especially like, "This mask is making a permanent home in my skin. My own sin." it's very dark and relateable.
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