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AGE:
22
LOC: San Leandro, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 30
LOC: San Leandro, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 30
Ok, so I love writing ha. but I’m guessing most people here do. I guess my writing has a little bit of a different style. I love to throw in whatever comes to my mind, and since I sit still for hours thinking about everything htat is going on around me, I’m always putting something together in my head Which means I write alot. I started out writing Christian poems, about God and about Jesus, and than I started getting led to write for God, and from his perspective of things, and alot of those ended up speaking to me more than other people =). I will most likely put those up because I know it made alot of people think.
So, something that doesn’t have to do with writing… I live in foster homes from when I was 5 to the time I…
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Jesus Christ. You know what, I suck bad at paying attention to Him nowadays, and spending time with my Daddy. But He is th reason I am here, and I don't live like it and I am a hypocrite sometimes but that will never reflect Him, the only actions I do that will reflect Him are the good ones out of love. He died on a cross out of love, because He didn't gain anything from it, we gained everything. He is mine. I am His. That will never change for anyone or anything, anytime or anywhere. I will ...
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just let go, don't worry. let the clouds consume your fears. keep moving, keep moving, you never know when the next wave will take you out to sea. you've been holding on for so long. your grip has slipped, but i swear i'll hold my hand out to save you before you fall from my sight. it's ok to be afraid, but fear is afraid of faith. So put your faith in the hand held out to you and let it pull you back up. I promise I won't let go, I promise I'll keep holding on until you're safe again. I'm wi...
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You consider me the consequence of what you see, while you're seated on your throne between the cheribum. Gold plated hatred covering your own sin, You hide behind beauty but your wickedness remains. I'll be the spec in your eye, but you'll become the plank. Consider this the consequence of jumping to conclusion. I'll consider you the end result of walking away from Eden. Could I catch you if I really tried? I probably could. But if leaving you means finding who I thought you were, Than consi...
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Who ever thought a soul could bleed? But your words cut me so deep. Abandon what follows me The rest is behind you. My soul bleeds. You came to me armed with a sharpened tongue. Equipped to speak death to my life. Ignoring my flesh with the knife, Carving up my insides. Outside I looked fine. It was the inside that was buried. I buried your words deep inside the soul you killed. They shared a casket with my heart. I loved you, but I guess I couldn’t show it clear enough. The moment you found...
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...And I never even got the chance to say goodbye… Unformed lungs / cry out / I never should have been // But instead of waiting / to see who I would save / You went and put me in the grave // Everything my future held / was dropped; / doused in flames. // The pages written out for me; have been erased // All I wanted was breath, I wanted to love her but it wouldn’t be… She was ashamed of me, so she ripped me from her body. Seeing the tears / run down her cheeks / and she walked away, My ar...
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geez.. i'm a sucker for good vocab lol.. and this had some really good nice flowing words in it. I bet people get mad cuz i say that on like everything like this but too bad lol. keep writing!
"WHEN OUR LOVE LIVED, WE LIVED IT TOGETHER WHEN IT DIED, I HAD TO SUFFER IT ALONE" ^^ Veryyyyy nice line. "I TRIED TO MEDICATE THE PAIN WITH WOMEN, DRUGS, & ALCOHOL BUT THAT ONLY PROLONGED THE SUFFERING THE PAIN WOULD LIE IN WAIT TILL I WAS SOBER AGAIN THEN ATTACK MY SOUL EAT AT MY MIND WITH MEMORIES OF YOU TO THE POINT WHERE THE LOSS OF YOU TORTURED ME" Verryyy true. That was a really nice and easy to understand but powerful description of how all those things are just temporary things, that...
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hmm. Lol. Is this actually about Jesus Christ? Or is did you just name it that cuz it kinda explains someone similar. =). I liked your use of vocab. Some may find this one kind of offensive, but hey! that's life for ya. but very nice use of words. I didn't like "spilled from a cunt" that much. But that's just me. haha. nice job.
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