wow, I really liked that, lol. it flows really well, and the rhymes are pretty good. one minor editing thing, "By then it may be too late" too instead of to, n'such, which someone's probably already mentioned. I love the referances to all the old school songs.. overall I just really like this.

I really liked this piece. I can relate to it really well is probably why. Lost loves are always so hard to let go, even if you know you have no chance at resuming it. That's both the blessing and curse of love; it lasts a long time. And the line "I’d rather be alone than be with one I’ll never Love." I can completely relate to that as well, that's one of my biggest fears, that I'll end up with someone I don't love. Great piece.

Wow. That's touching... the power of prayer is strong, isn't it? I'm happy for your son's recovery. I really don't know what else to say.

I like this poem, it's well written and it's something I think a lot of people can relate to. Whenever we aren't happy we tend to wonder what it was that really made the difference, and this poem hits that mark very well. Well written.

I really like this piece, and it's a good reminder to all those people who think "That will never happen to me." The form is excellent in my opinion, and it flows well... I don't think I can offer any criticism. Well done.

This writing is something I can easily relate to. Most people I imagine could, I know I constantly find myself thinking about things I want, things that could be, and music is often a cause of this thinking, and can often even take me into a somewhat surreal world, which is entirely manipulated by the music. All in all I really enjoyed reading this, and as the first non-fiction piece I've reviewed... well, any future ones have a high standard to meet for me now.

Another great piece; I think I'm adding you to my favorites, heh. Although I did like the first one slightly better because it seemed to be have more vivid images, this one is still really good. Reading all this is almost like reading a list of things I want, and some things you wrote, even if I never thought about before, reading them described as you do makes me want them. Excellent piece, I look forward to many more.

I can relate to this completely, I was actually in a similar situation until recently when I told her. Well... as for the outcome, the last line depicts that well. Anyway, nice piece, I hope your situation works itself out better than mine did.

Wow, I really liked this piece. The relationship depicted in the poem really reminds me of one of mine... she will never let me in. i can not call out to her. i’m a sponge for her lies, absorbing them to the bone. That part especially I can connect with... excellent job.

Short but sweet. Conveys the message it's meant to. I really like the last two lines "You never know I may be the one" That's the thing about love isn't it? You never do know. Nice job.