NOt bad, however, i feel this a bit "propagandish", that may not be a word, but it should be, i read alot of work similar to this, its a little stale,i mean dont get me wrong, the metaphors are great "The monkeys searching for non-existent lice Raping thier mother " if you mean the goverment fucking with the people who are supposed to be protected by the almighty constitution, the very people who created that goverment being spied on for reasons as vague as the expression on dubya's face, goo...

WONDERFUL, i adore how you described this scene, i mean, it was like i was there, among them, partaking in the whole nude experience. One thing i think i would have preffered however, wouldve been to havve been to have not been told that they were nudists at all.

Tragically beautiful. the one line that kinda irked me however was "so many off-switched souls" contrary to the mortality of our physical bodies,the soul is eternal.Really enjoyed the structure of this piece, thanks.

Funny because i can relate to this. Interesting, how you bring to light the schism which is created when man is connected to man through technology(ewven though this is probably not at all what you meant.) Thanks for the post!

nICE! Iambic right? me thinks similar to shakespearian sonnet but four beats not five, is there a name for this meter? really fun to read and take apart, really enjoyed this one. thanks.

I find this entire piece alarmingly funny, really insightful really, the line "you are nobody unless someone in hollywood is scripting you" i think is my favorite, and seems to be the gist of what the gayru is getting at.