WONDERFUL, i adore how you described this scene, i mean, it was like i was there, among them, partaking in the whole nude experience. One thing i think i would have preffered however, wouldve been to havve been to have not been told that they were nudists at all.

Tragically beautiful. the one line that kinda irked me however was "so many off-switched souls" contrary to the mortality of our physical bodies,the soul is eternal.Really enjoyed the structure of this piece, thanks.

Funny because i can relate to this. Interesting, how you bring to light the schism which is created when man is connected to man through technology(ewven though this is probably not at all what you meant.) Thanks for the post!

nICE! Iambic right? me thinks similar to shakespearian sonnet but four beats not five, is there a name for this meter? really fun to read and take apart, really enjoyed this one. thanks.

I find this entire piece alarmingly funny, really insightful really, the line "you are nobody unless someone in hollywood is scripting you" i think is my favorite, and seems to be the gist of what the gayru is getting at.

I really apreciate the detail in this, and the absurdity of it all really brings the dream theme home! Thanks for posting and raising my pulse!