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LOC: Bangor, PA
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LAST LOGIN: September 25
LOC: Bangor, PA
GEN: Male
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“60 miles per hour, this is great but I need more.” The 1967 Stingray Convertible clung to the curve, like a red fox darting in and out of bushes. “I can’t believe this! No more hiding in the shadows after I make my kills. No more hiding in the shadows at all! 200 years of living in terror of what they would do to me if caught. Those damned priests always spreading their hatred of my kind.” “How was it my fault? Nature chose some of us to evolve and now they are no longer at the top of the fo...
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Give me another chance, I'll change!
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Mother, I thought you loved me.
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Cleaning up my fathers flagrant dalliances.
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Happiness surrounded by peaks of sorrow.
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Very dark and brooding. I believe it is definitely publishable, considering the pessimistic view of this era. Makes you wonder if we are not doing just that now.
This is truly unique, in that although the requirement was six words, there was never a specification to structure. If any structure is allowed, this is a wonderful six word memoir which provides a jolt of laughter. If this is your life though, are you saying that metaphorically you were asleep for thirty years, then when "awakened" you had to excrete the metaphorical waste from yourself? A cleansing perhaps? Or is it just the morning after one of those really good nights when you know you ha...
I think a semicolon would have worked just as fine, but otherwise it is to the point; definitely not subtle! lol. A very enjoyable headscratcher.
The more I said this to myself out loud, the more it appealed to me. One thing I am asking myself is,"Would this be as desireable if it was not for the title which alluded to what thought process we should use when reading the statment?" If you did not have , "life in a nut shell" in the title it may be a stretch to associate the statement. So it seems more like an 11 word memoir, but either way, it works very well!
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