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AGE: 49
LOC: Boulevard, CA
GEN: Female
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Short Story / Merlin's Wish
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Merlin's Wish "Time travel is impossible " Thought Merlin with his head in his hands staring at the crystal ball in front of him on the the round table that was designed with all his hopes of the age. He laughed to himself that historians had never been able to find the great table. If only he could go back again to the time of kings and chivary when knights were brave and just. When he was proud of men and talk to Arthur once more. Could we have forgiven knowing what a burden love can be ? ...
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Poetry / sacrifice
I know the poem is expressing how you may feel but my gut just says run from that relationship if a real part of your life. It is possible to find love again, it may take time but so worth it! I know I should be rateing your poem but I just want to scream dump the jerk.
I really liked it , not a pro but wanted to let you know that it moved me ! I was really impressed to tell you the truth.
Poetry / Wooden Pews
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Redemption-Prologue
Ok, I will not ask who he is being chased by. But I did find myself asking who is he and what does he want.
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