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AGE: 16
LOC: Sheboygan, WI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 26

Hi, I’m Sam. I like books, movies, music, hanging with friends, playing videogames, the theater, art, and forensics. I’ve been writing for a while now, and feel good about my art. Idk, i’m werid and strange and smell like human, which (in a way) is good but in retrospect may be bad because i’m not sure just how human i am. hahaha….seriously…:D

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Short Story / The Accident
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The day that I died was the day that I started to live. My life ended with a blinding flash of light, a loud scream, and tires skidding to a stop. It was around dark, the sun was almost gone and the moon, like always, was out and ready to play. I went running, I always go running. I love the sound of my running shoes on the black pavement, going from pavement to gravel, pavement to gravel. I live out in the country, so I don’t have to worry about a lot of traffic, just the late night cruisers...
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She walks over to the black sweater torn up on the ground. There’s blood on it, and as she squeezes its shattered remains, red blood oozes out of it, soaking her fingers in blood, dripping onto her orange Converse sneakers, and soaking into the ground. There are footprints all over the ground, showing a struggle between a man and…something else. Claw marks are etched into the earth, too small to be from a wolf or dog, but something else. As she bends to the ground and puts her fingers to the ...
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Good-bye, Dear Darling I may not see you again I will muss you a lot and think of you often But have the saddness of not seeing your face. Too bad it will be to see you leave me Too sad I will be to watch you lower into the ground And too angry I will be That you left in the first place So now i say Good bye, forever.
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CHAPTER 1 – THE MURDER A murder has been committed; Isabelle Backabello and Fredrick Backabello had been brutally murdered. But, before I get too far, lets go back to the beginning. It all started ten years ago in 450AC in Maltic, Glornon. Untalla Backabello, a tall, brown-haired 6-year-old with rich purple eyes and odd, pointy ears, was playing with her best friend, Gantallana Anticepello, in the woods by their house. Gantallana Anticepello was a tall, black-haired 6-year-old girl with one l...
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Poetry / Suiccide
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I find my way to this endless earth, going through hard times. Going by day by day, but nothing good comes by, We've been through one fight after another, but I just can't take it anymore. So i call up my aunt And my only two sisters... And I bid them all farewell, for now my life will be no more. I lay awake all night long, but no one comes by. So i take this gun to my head And take my life away. No work tomarrow, No life, No love, You may come and see my body But you'll know that I'm not th...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The Butterfly Girl
It was really good, i liked how you turned the whole cop-case thing around with the tariot cards, and had her explain the case through them, and how you explained what each and every card meant, it brings the reader in more, like she was talking to Maureen, not just explaining the case in a dull, dreary way. Putting the other dective in when you did was good because it brings the case more to life, and you can tell that she's in the middle of the case, and they don't have many leads, which is...
Short Story / High School Humiliation
I think that that's a really good story, it connects to teenagers who have parents as teachers and get embaressed anyways. I like the description of when your mom subbed for that teacher and your first out-of-body experience. It also has a good narriative hook, it draws the reader in really well and I wouldn't change much to this pice.
Poetry / Nothing, Nobody
It's a really good pice, it's got a lot of emotion and i can really relate to it. I can see a depth, a deeper part of this nothing who can't hide or run away becuase there is nowhere to run. People bar you down and there's no way to escape.
Poetry / "Remorse"
I think it's a very good pice, you have a lot of emotion that you put in it. It's really good.
Poetry / Scars
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